Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

How exciting it is when our children have that glow in their eyes and winning in a competition. This is truly an experience of happiness. Great job.

 Comment Written 31-May-2016

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Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

This is a cute entry into the Feelings contest. Liked the way it reads aloud. Good rhythm and rhyme. Nice flow to the work. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 31-May-2016

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Comment from pattipac

Excellent

I enjoyed your upbeat poem about trying to influence Cindy to choose a career. Good rhyme, and humor made it an enjoyable read.

 Comment Written 31-May-2016

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Comment from Nika2016

Excellent

Even if its not real, it brings a smile...In my opinion a comedian is like a doctor as humor heals...so mom was wrong. The problem is that teachers dislike class comedians and they seem like revolutionaries to them...so no accolades til adulthood...so sad..Nice little poem that brings a smile..

 Comment Written 30-May-2016

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Comment from djeckert

Excellent

ha too funny, such a great set up to go with the pict. Im still not exactly sure that I know what it is, nor do I want to. Thanks so much for a good chuckle. God Blesses and good luck to your entry which im sure will do well.

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Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

Well stated. It is often easier to write about the intense feelings of pain, Instead of the fleeting moments of happiness. What a little jewel this picture and poem are. Thank you for giving it to us.

 Comment Written 30-May-2016

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Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute happy poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. it was a joy to read and review. Good luck in the contest. Teri

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reply by Teri7 on 31-May-2016

you are so welcome. teri

reply by Anonymous Member on 03-Jun-2016

you are so welcome. teri

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

The poem is well written. I like the conversational rhyme scheme and the wry humor.. This shows how so many parents feel about the future of their children. The child usually has a different view of the future. Well written ... Good job!

 Comment Written 30-May-2016

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Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is a cute write, mystery writer, I enjoyed reading this poem about the little girl that wanted to spread joy and laughter, made me smile as I read it, the picture is just too cute. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-May-2016

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Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

I loved your poem and will be watching for it in the voting booth..
How fun is that..
Your (character) daughter wanted to be a comedian..
She could do worse, with all the money they make..
Best wishes.. thanks for the laugh..
:-) Carolyn

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