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Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "choose"A book of poetry, quotes and short stories
6 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
Greater is He who is within us than the enemy of our souls. May your Thanksgiving day be blessed with plenty. Blessings Patricia
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Greater is He who is within us than the enemy of our souls. May your Thanksgiving day be blessed with plenty. Blessings Patricia
Comment Written 25-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Thank you Patricia and you are so right, that is one of my favorite Bible verses. Thank you for the wonderful review and taking the tie to read my poem. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours.
Comment from Eric1
Hi Annie, this is a wonderful and heartfelt poem about waiting around for the love of your life to actually recognise that you are even there by his side, wonderful emotive poem that tugs at the heartstrings my friend.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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Hi Annie, this is a wonderful and heartfelt poem about waiting around for the love of your life to actually recognise that you are even there by his side, wonderful emotive poem that tugs at the heartstrings my friend.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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Thank you Eric for your kind words and wonderful review. Have a wonderful holiday :)
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It was a pleasure to read and review my friend, happy Thanksgiving.
Comment from krys123
AnnieGale;
-a very appropriate, relative and complementary picture that you have chosen for your writing.
- you choose an appropriate title also "Choose" as your writing clearly states, throughout, then an angel awaits for a choice to be made between the devil and he angel.
-a superb and eloquent metaphorical imagery that is exquisitely expressive and vividly descriptive throughout your writing.
- and thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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AnnieGale;
-a very appropriate, relative and complementary picture that you have chosen for your writing.
- you choose an appropriate title also "Choose" as your writing clearly states, throughout, then an angel awaits for a choice to be made between the devil and he angel.
-a superb and eloquent metaphorical imagery that is exquisitely expressive and vividly descriptive throughout your writing.
- and thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
Comment Written 23-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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Thank you Alex, I'm glad to be back to do some writing. You're comments are poetry in itself. I enjoy reading your work as well and more so in the future. Happy Thanksgiving :)
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You are so very welcome AnnieGale and may you have also a very Happy Thanksgiving.
Alex
Comment from Gloria ....
I really like this one Annie. Your artwork selection is fresh and interesting. A redhead eh?
Your words are romantic, for whom among us hasn't waited for that special man to finally sit up and notice that we are the best thing that could ever happen to him. By the time they figure it out, it's already well into the future.
Most beautiful. I like your delicate touch.
Gloria
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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I really like this one Annie. Your artwork selection is fresh and interesting. A redhead eh?
Your words are romantic, for whom among us hasn't waited for that special man to finally sit up and notice that we are the best thing that could ever happen to him. By the time they figure it out, it's already well into the future.
Most beautiful. I like your delicate touch.
Gloria
Comment Written 23-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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Thank you Gloria for the kind words and wonderful review. p.s. Redheads run in the family ;) Have a wonderful Thanksgiving
Comment from rspoet
Sounds like you'd be a lot better off if you're not
the one he finally chooses
But rather find someone who chooses you first
because you are the one
because you're worth it
Beautiful picture to match the poem
Well done
Best wishes
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2015
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Sounds like you'd be a lot better off if you're not
the one he finally chooses
But rather find someone who chooses you first
because you are the one
because you're worth it
Beautiful picture to match the poem
Well done
Best wishes
Comment Written 23-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2015
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You know rspoet, you may have a good point there, Lol, actually haven't looked at it that way. Thank you for your kind words and review. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours
Comment from JanPerry
Dreaming of love is what you are doing. I dont think men ever think of love. Which I find surprising as 90% of songs on the radio are about love. If it was about sex then there would be 3 times more songs on the radio!
However, its about time women were singing more about love, since they are the ones often seeking it!!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2015
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Dreaming of love is what you are doing. I dont think men ever think of love. Which I find surprising as 90% of songs on the radio are about love. If it was about sex then there would be 3 times more songs on the radio!
However, its about time women were singing more about love, since they are the ones often seeking it!!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2015
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Thank you JanPerry, I believe you are right on the nose with that comment!! Lol...Thank you for the wonderful review and Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours :)