Comment from DALLAS01

Exceptional

Wow, Dean. This is one powerful volcanic eruption. Look out for the lava flow to follow. Hope whatever it is, you got it off your chest. Personally, I think this is one of your best.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

Geez! I truly hope that whoever this is atones before it is too late. Another amazing write of which you can be proud even if you are ranting. I guess it is always better to get things off your chest and not let them fester into actions. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015

I'm afraid it is already much too late for that, my dear Monica. However, if you'd like to help, I could use some assistance in digging a rather large hole in the field just behind my house, if you feel so inclined, heh-heh...

Thanks very much for your review. :)

~Dean

Comment from write hand blue

Excellent

That's a nice horrific rant, but who is it aimed at. A nice diabolic twist.

Nice choice of colours yellow and black go together well.

Composed for maximum effect with a unique word selection.
Written to a high standard and inventive.

Good poem.

:) mel.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015

Thank you very much, Mel. So sorry about the lengthy delay in responding. I've been a little under the weather lately. As always, I really appreciate your comments and review. :)

~Dean

Comment from JanetRussek

Excellent

Hello Dean and thank you for the very unique and intimidating read. Lots to think about in a most unusual and perplexing way.
Warm Regards,
Janet

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015

Thanks so much for the outstanding review, Janet. I certainly appreciate it. :)

~Dean

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

So this was written with anger as well as evil in mind, whatever it is as always well penned. The line
I'll open up your every scar, then squeeze out all your dreams....
like that one. Liked them all, as a rant it's a great read.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015

Thanks so much, Pearl, and I'm really glad you liked it. I can tell you this, I feel much better having gotten it off of my chest, LOL. ~Dean

Comment from rtobaygo

Excellent

Hello

WOW, what powerful imagery...haunting, visceral, evil and black as pitch, presented with such rhyming ease. Kudos!

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

PS: OOS

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015

Thanks, Ray, and you do the same, my friend. :)

~Dean

Comment from Writingfundimension

Excellent

Super poem, Dean. These days, Anonymous is becoming quite famous and very, very busy. Loved this line:

'I'll open up your every scar, then squeeze out all your dreams...'

:) Bev

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015

Thanks so much, Bev. I appreciate your comments as always. :) ~Dean

reply by Writingfundimension on 05-Feb-2015

You're very welcome, Dean. :)

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Bravo Dean for this. it is frustrating when one is anon and we cannot know to whom we could respond and how we should respond. Blessings Brother, Patricia

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015

Thanks very much for reviewing and sharing your thoughts with me on the poem. Yes, it is very frustrating indeed. :) ~Dean

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

WOW. Let me introduce myself, I am Gretchen Hargis. Please don't dedicate anything to me. LOL. This was really terrifying. I loved it, nonetheless, but it did freak me out. My fave line was the Donner party line. Even though I know they did it to survive, there is just something so chilling about it. I guess it is knowing how low you can sink in order to survive. Great poem that should wake up any anonymous. Great rant. Purge, baby, purge. Gretchen

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015

Hah-ha, thank you, Gretchen. I must admit I feel much better now having gotten it off my chest, LOL. I sincerely appreciate your comments as always. :)~Dean

Comment from Alan K Pease

Excellent

A very scary poem for what I feel is that "anonymity" is you. There are times when I feel you are too good a story teller, hard to determine which is best. I wish I had a six.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015

That's very kind of you, Alan, but no six is ever necessary. I run out of my meager allotment almost as fast as they're replenished. There are so many talented poets and authors here, yourself included, that I find them quite difficult to hold on to.

Much obliged for the review.~Dean