Is It The End?
How much worse does it need to get?37 total reviews
Comment from Herkjv1611
Perceiving the world through the spiritual eyes of understanding, and to the letter from the writer, it is true, everything in the natural origin had been destroyed by evil.Inventors of evil things in the world brought ill effects of the environment like nuclear power energy, factory smokes, gas emissions and many more.Ozone layers cannot be restored.Depletion of soil due to inorganic fertilizer application, plants lack the desired nutrients for man.Such condition saddened the heart of God that people are following the doctrines of the evil.The devil has been defeated at the cross when Our Lord Jesus Christ died for our sins and by His blood all sins are forgiven.God will remake the world though His son, Our Lord Jesus Christ and personally imprison Satan including the false prophets at the bottomless pit called hell. Our Lord desires to have all be saved .2 Peter 3:9.. The Lord is not slack concerning his promise, as some men count slackness; but is longsuffering to usward,not willing that any should perish, but that all should come to repentance. Thanks for writing a unique kind of prose!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015
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Perceiving the world through the spiritual eyes of understanding, and to the letter from the writer, it is true, everything in the natural origin had been destroyed by evil.Inventors of evil things in the world brought ill effects of the environment like nuclear power energy, factory smokes, gas emissions and many more.Ozone layers cannot be restored.Depletion of soil due to inorganic fertilizer application, plants lack the desired nutrients for man.Such condition saddened the heart of God that people are following the doctrines of the evil.The devil has been defeated at the cross when Our Lord Jesus Christ died for our sins and by His blood all sins are forgiven.God will remake the world though His son, Our Lord Jesus Christ and personally imprison Satan including the false prophets at the bottomless pit called hell. Our Lord desires to have all be saved .2 Peter 3:9.. The Lord is not slack concerning his promise, as some men count slackness; but is longsuffering to usward,not willing that any should perish, but that all should come to repentance. Thanks for writing a unique kind of prose!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015
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Many thanks for your thoughts on the piece. It is very much appreciated
Comment from MelB
I enjoyed this read and agree with you. The world is going downhill and definitely not what was intended. There is so much evil that is around. You are so right about the age of innocence gone and self-entitlement prevailing. On the other hand, I do see kind people in the world yet and people that are willing to help others and for them, I am thankful. Well written piece.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015
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I enjoyed this read and agree with you. The world is going downhill and definitely not what was intended. There is so much evil that is around. You are so right about the age of innocence gone and self-entitlement prevailing. On the other hand, I do see kind people in the world yet and people that are willing to help others and for them, I am thankful. Well written piece.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015
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Many thanks for your thoughts on this. It is very much appreciated
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was the most amazing piece of writing, in a letter to God, I have ever read. No wonder it won. It is amazing. I love the way you used that song, and how easily it fitted to talk to God about your worries, our worries. Congratulations! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2015
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That was the most amazing piece of writing, in a letter to God, I have ever read. No wonder it won. It is amazing. I love the way you used that song, and how easily it fitted to talk to God about your worries, our worries. Congratulations! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 28-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2015
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Many thanks for the very generous praise. Your review is much appreciated
Comment from gypsycaravan
I wish I had found this piece when I still had a six. I honestly think this is the best writing I've read on FanStory. It is such a powerful writing with so many thoughts to ponder about today's world. And what a clever presentation with the Louis Armstrong classic. Your artwork is also fabulous. You deserve much more recognition for this. I hope you will get it published somewhere.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2015
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I wish I had found this piece when I still had a six. I honestly think this is the best writing I've read on FanStory. It is such a powerful writing with so many thoughts to ponder about today's world. And what a clever presentation with the Louis Armstrong classic. Your artwork is also fabulous. You deserve much more recognition for this. I hope you will get it published somewhere.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2015
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Many thanks for your very gracious words. This one just came out when I wasn't, expecting it. Happens sometimes. Your thoughts are much appreciated, as always
Comment from Drew Delaney
congratulations on your win. This is quite a letter to God, and I think many are mentally writing something similar. We wonder, how long will it be before God just tears us to pieces. Man is self-destructing and possibly that is what He may allow. Sad to think on this no-return situation. Well written. Drew
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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congratulations on your win. This is quite a letter to God, and I think many are mentally writing something similar. We wonder, how long will it be before God just tears us to pieces. Man is self-destructing and possibly that is what He may allow. Sad to think on this no-return situation. Well written. Drew
Comment Written 27-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Many thanks for your thoughts on this. I felt this was an apt assessment of where the world is at the minute. The review is very much appreciated
Comment from prettybluebirds
Very good, well expressed. This is how I feel about the world today. Even the butterflies are disappearing. Remember the monarch butterfly? They were everywhere when I was a child, now there are none. So many things are changing, some for the good but more for the bad. Thank you for your lovely poem.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Very good, well expressed. This is how I feel about the world today. Even the butterflies are disappearing. Remember the monarch butterfly? They were everywhere when I was a child, now there are none. So many things are changing, some for the good but more for the bad. Thank you for your lovely poem.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Many thanks for your thoughts on this. Much appreciated
Comment from Acquired Taste
Gareth, the tune reverberated throughout my reading of your tome - you took this lovely song and bought it into our current - albeit sorry state of affairs. This is simply terrific. Enjoyable, sad and prophetic. Excellent offering. Jean
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Gareth, the tune reverberated throughout my reading of your tome - you took this lovely song and bought it into our current - albeit sorry state of affairs. This is simply terrific. Enjoyable, sad and prophetic. Excellent offering. Jean
Comment Written 27-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Many thanks for your thoughts on this Jean. I love this song but sometimes can't shake the reality. Much appreciated and the gift of the stars.
Comment from acerisestory
I have no question why you won this contest, Gareth. It is a very powerful write -- your letter to God.
I very much like how you've taken Louis Armstrong's song -- one with hope and happiness and changed it fit the sad things happening in our world today. I like the impact you've created by repeating "Where is our wonderful world?".
Your words move with a great flow, and the alliteration you've used adds to that flow.
Thank you for sharing this fine poem! Alana
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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I have no question why you won this contest, Gareth. It is a very powerful write -- your letter to God.
I very much like how you've taken Louis Armstrong's song -- one with hope and happiness and changed it fit the sad things happening in our world today. I like the impact you've created by repeating "Where is our wonderful world?".
Your words move with a great flow, and the alliteration you've used adds to that flow.
Thank you for sharing this fine poem! Alana
Comment Written 27-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Many thanks for the review and the kind words. Much appreciated
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You are welcome!
Comment from Ulla
Oh, I did like this, and your take on Luis Armstrong's beautiful song. One of my favorite. So right, we do seem to be destroying our beautiful world!
Comma issues: To have blind faith(,)when all around......
I know there is one(,) but when....
I also know(,) we have let you....
and I worry(,) if today's world...
Well done
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Oh, I did like this, and your take on Luis Armstrong's beautiful song. One of my favorite. So right, we do seem to be destroying our beautiful world!
Comma issues: To have blind faith(,)when all around......
I know there is one(,) but when....
I also know(,) we have let you....
and I worry(,) if today's world...
Well done
Comment Written 27-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Many thanks for your thoughts and the review. Much appreciated
Comment from TAB_that's me
I think God must be crying at the way His beautiful world is being destroyed. Congratulations on winning the contest!
Teresa
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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I think God must be crying at the way His beautiful world is being destroyed. Congratulations on winning the contest!
Teresa
Comment Written 27-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Many thanks for your thoughts and the congratulations. It is most appreciated