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8 total reviews
Comment from Sankey
Good work not sure how long ago this was written sorry if I took too long to get to it. No spags and a great poem.
Picture well chosen also.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Good work not sure how long ago this was written sorry if I took too long to get to it. No spags and a great poem.
Picture well chosen also.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, I think we have all been busy caught up in the holidays and trying to now unwind. I appreciate your kind words...take care :)
Comment from Nichola
Nice consonance with -r- in Ring and Year;
lovely assonance in faith and face;
Nice meter in: goodness and bad, travel to unknown places... be joyous or sad.
lovely alliteration in wish and well and assonance in well and health, and in best and blessed.
This a warm hearted poem expressing hope for the New Year. Very nicely written.
Nichola
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
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Nice consonance with -r- in Ring and Year;
lovely assonance in faith and face;
Nice meter in: goodness and bad, travel to unknown places... be joyous or sad.
lovely alliteration in wish and well and assonance in well and health, and in best and blessed.
This a warm hearted poem expressing hope for the New Year. Very nicely written.
Nichola
Comment Written 05-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
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Thank you for your kind and thoughtful words...
Comment from goompa
A lovely poem wishing all a happy 2014. The best of happiness and good health go back to you and yours as we enter the new year.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2013
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A lovely poem wishing all a happy 2014. The best of happiness and good health go back to you and yours as we enter the new year.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2013
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Thank you very much, have a safe and happy new year :)
Comment from milos_mental
A simple but heartfelt message, set off perfectly by the beautiful artwork - great choice!
I really enjoyed this, and your rhyming was subtle and unobtrusive. I'm sure a lot of thought and work went into this, but it seemed effortless. Really nicely done.
Thank you for sharing this and a Happy New Year to you!
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2013
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A simple but heartfelt message, set off perfectly by the beautiful artwork - great choice!
I really enjoyed this, and your rhyming was subtle and unobtrusive. I'm sure a lot of thought and work went into this, but it seemed effortless. Really nicely done.
Thank you for sharing this and a Happy New Year to you!
Comment Written 31-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2013
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Thank you very much for your kind and thoughtful words...happy new year :)
Comment from MoIronE13
Thank you for a beautiful blessing for the New Year 2014
I pray that your's will be filled with "spirit" driven works and writings
May the FS members unite in embracing each others works and reviews
Let us ALL grow wiser together.
Peace
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2013
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Thank you for a beautiful blessing for the New Year 2014
I pray that your's will be filled with "spirit" driven works and writings
May the FS members unite in embracing each others works and reviews
Let us ALL grow wiser together.
Peace
Comment Written 31-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2013
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What a nice statement, Write on!! Thank you and the same for all, Happy New Year <3
Comment from lakeport
Celebartion day, indeed another year is starting soon, that's a very heartfelt expressed poem.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Hugs!Lakeport.
Happy New Year!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Celebartion day, indeed another year is starting soon, that's a very heartfelt expressed poem.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Hugs!Lakeport.
Happy New Year!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much...Happy New Year...hugs!!
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your welcome.Hugs!lakeport.
Happy New Year!
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Your welcome.Hugs!Lakeport.
Happy New Year!
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Thanks for the inspirational theme poem. Hopefully, this will be a good Omen, precursor to health, wealth & happiness. Thanks for your gracious holy blessings. I love pictures of sunrises & sunsets, how beautiful it is. Happy New Year, AnnieGale, wackydo
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Thanks for the inspirational theme poem. Hopefully, this will be a good Omen, precursor to health, wealth & happiness. Thanks for your gracious holy blessings. I love pictures of sunrises & sunsets, how beautiful it is. Happy New Year, AnnieGale, wackydo
Comment Written 30-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed this little poem...Happy New Year!!! :)
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Anytime!
Comment from CreativeXXXX
A nice, realistic poem with a lovely message. I like how it gives a balanced view of what the new year could bring. Good use of contrasting words, e.g. joyous vs sad, goodness vs bad etc. Happy New Year to you.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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A nice, realistic poem with a lovely message. I like how it gives a balanced view of what the new year could bring. Good use of contrasting words, e.g. joyous vs sad, goodness vs bad etc. Happy New Year to you.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much!!