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Comment from Nosha17
Your words about Autumn are very fitting and well chosen. Your rhymes are good and it reads very well. I think your poem would benefit from a nice colourful picture of Autumn or Winter, hope you didn't mind me saying so. Well-written. Faye
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2013
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Your words about Autumn are very fitting and well chosen. Your rhymes are good and it reads very well. I think your poem would benefit from a nice colourful picture of Autumn or Winter, hope you didn't mind me saying so. Well-written. Faye
Comment Written 29-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2013
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Nosha17...Thank you...I am new to this and not quite sure how to add the photos, I'm still getting used to this site. Thank you for reading and for your kind words.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is quite lovely in the serenity of spirit it conveys to the reader. Your imagery successfully paints a picture of the hush before winter's silence in the mind's eye of the reader. Nicely done! I thank you for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2013
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This is quite lovely in the serenity of spirit it conveys to the reader. Your imagery successfully paints a picture of the hush before winter's silence in the mind's eye of the reader. Nicely done! I thank you for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2013
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You're welcome and thank you Mystic Angel 7777....your thoughts on this a very poetic also.