thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Wishful thinking granted"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
7 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
solid rhyming
a most thoughtful poem of faith
wouldn't that be wonderful, to have a world with no hatred or crime, just love :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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solid rhyming
a most thoughtful poem of faith
wouldn't that be wonderful, to have a world with no hatred or crime, just love :-) Brooke
Comment Written 10-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Brooke, thanks for the review sorry it took me so long to respond to you I have been sick and then went on vacation.have a bless day Sandy,
Comment from annatberry
That was beautiful and truly a wonderful wish. Your writing was great, but what you said was more than words. It was truly a wonderful message from God. God Bless you for writing this poem.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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That was beautiful and truly a wonderful wish. Your writing was great, but what you said was more than words. It was truly a wonderful message from God. God Bless you for writing this poem.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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annaberry. thank you for your review sorry it has taken me so long to respond to it ,I have been sick and then went on vacation.Blessings
Comment from emrpoems
You sure made a very unselfish wish for everyone to come to know Jesus and hen there would be only peace and love. Great poem but I did not like your picture very much. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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You sure made a very unselfish wish for everyone to come to know Jesus and hen there would be only peace and love. Great poem but I did not like your picture very much. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 05-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you for your review, sorry it took so long to respond to it have been sick and out of town.Blessings
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Glad you're up and about again
Comment from Silent1rose
I enjoyed reading this. It flowed very smoothly. A very good meesage put into the lines of a poem. One of the many gifts that God has given his children.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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I enjoyed reading this. It flowed very smoothly. A very good meesage put into the lines of a poem. One of the many gifts that God has given his children.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you for your review,sorry it has taken me so long to respond to it ,have been sick and then went out of town.Hope you have a bless day
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No worrries. I hope you get better :) ~ Rose
Comment from Starlit Ink
This is an amazing wish. You were creative to come up with this, as I wouldn't of thought of that. Wouldn't it be great to wish that everyone would know Jesus. If they did, what more could you wish for? I like the imagery of the gates of Heaven opening. Good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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This is an amazing wish. You were creative to come up with this, as I wouldn't of thought of that. Wouldn't it be great to wish that everyone would know Jesus. If they did, what more could you wish for? I like the imagery of the gates of Heaven opening. Good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you for your review,sorry it has taken me so long to respond to it .I have been sick and then went out of town. Hope you have a bless day
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Fabulous. I wish a lot more people would read this poem, so full of faith, love and humanity.
The writing is good also and it has a good flow, consistent and simple.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013
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Fabulous. I wish a lot more people would read this poem, so full of faith, love and humanity.
The writing is good also and it has a good flow, consistent and simple.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 05-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013
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Thank you and God bless
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this poetic wish for everyone to accept Christ and have no need for hell. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this poetic wish for everyone to accept Christ and have no need for hell. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013
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Thank you and God bless you.