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Comment from Jean Lutz
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He hears my driving in the rain pleas, too. On sunny days and when I am not fighting traffic, I send up drive-by prayers. When I pass the home of someone I know, a church or a small business that needs customers I lift them up. I relate to all that you wrote. Keep the prayers and thanksgivings going up.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
    Thank you for your review and God bless
Comment from adewpearl
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solid rhyming couplets
You deliver a thoughtful spiritual message by using the imagery of the rainbow, which God has used to convey messages since Noah's Ark :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
    Thank you for the review God is good,blessings to you
Comment from Liz Dunbee
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This is a lovely verse full of faith and hope. It is nerve wracking to drive in a storm. But all one can do is relax and let God take care of us in those moments. Your rhyming is excellent and I love the picture you chose.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
    Hi Liz, Thank you for the review and nice words .Yes all we can do is let God be in control. Blessings sandy
Comment from RGstar
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Also a friend of mine. It is funny how we seem to find little signs that brings us a little closer.

A rainbow in the rain can be so serene and calming, it is a wonder it seems like a minor miracle, accentuated by he rain.

Best wishes,

RGstar

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
    Thank you for the review and I am glad to hear God is also a friend of yours also. Blessings to you.
Comment from lindalcreel
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We are never alone. I could almost see the white knuckles keeping a firm grip on the steering wheel. I used to think people didn't know how to drive in the snow, now I wonder if some of them should stay off the road when it rains. I live in Florida and though it's the sunshine state, we get quite a few afternoon thunder showers. Odd that it happens just as the kids are getting off the school bus. Great story. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
    Thanks for the review,I also live in Florida, I'm in Jacksonville where are you? Afternoon showers are often here come four o;clock.Thank God we are not ever alone.Blessings
reply by lindalcreel on 10-Sep-2013
    I live in Kissimmee, near Lake Toho. Maybe we should plan to get together some time. My husband has free passes to Disney. We can take up to three people in every day. We'll have to plan an outing, soon.