FATE -- Fortune Admission Test Exam
No escape from the FATE. Please read Notes. 262 words65 total reviews
Comment from ruzu27
I tend to worry about things I cannot change. But then, I sit down and tell myself to let go, it's fate, everything is looked after and think whatever direction
it goes, I'll find a way.
Then I can let go and feel I have a help! I believe in fate. Thank you for sharing.
Ruth
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I tend to worry about things I cannot change. But then, I sit down and tell myself to let go, it's fate, everything is looked after and think whatever direction
it goes, I'll find a way.
Then I can let go and feel I have a help! I believe in fate. Thank you for sharing.
Ruth
Comment Written 05-Oct-2013
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear
I read your fiction thoughts about fate and found it real interesting here are my thoughts--
I do not believe in a fate that falls on us however when we don't act; but I do believe when fate that falls on us ~ we should act which, will help lead us to the heavenly gates
Gert
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear
I read your fiction thoughts about fate and found it real interesting here are my thoughts--
I do not believe in a fate that falls on us however when we don't act; but I do believe when fate that falls on us ~ we should act which, will help lead us to the heavenly gates
Gert
Comment Written 21-Aug-2013
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
Fate and destiny go hand in hand... and you know what? I don't ever want to live forever not in heaven and not in hell, I would rather live this life we have and be immortal only in the memory and hearts that I love and care for, nothing more... I welcome death he is a good friend, why run from something that is inevitable? Well that is how I look at it, live and be good to those around you, the world is your country, all mankind are your brethren and to do good is my religion :)
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Fate and destiny go hand in hand... and you know what? I don't ever want to live forever not in heaven and not in hell, I would rather live this life we have and be immortal only in the memory and hearts that I love and care for, nothing more... I welcome death he is a good friend, why run from something that is inevitable? Well that is how I look at it, live and be good to those around you, the world is your country, all mankind are your brethren and to do good is my religion :)
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
Comment from Titanx9
The Bible says narrow is the road that will lead to His heaven. Many folks believe the can do all manners of terrible things on earth and be rewarded by G-d and get a place in heaven. As you note, "...they neither practiced nor maintained the righteous living as per God words." I wish I knew more about your dream; it sounds beautiful, on the one hand, and daunting on the other. Nicely done!
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The Bible says narrow is the road that will lead to His heaven. Many folks believe the can do all manners of terrible things on earth and be rewarded by G-d and get a place in heaven. As you note, "...they neither practiced nor maintained the righteous living as per God words." I wish I knew more about your dream; it sounds beautiful, on the one hand, and daunting on the other. Nicely done!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Al,
I got a bit lost in your words but I do understand what you mean. I had to read it twice before it made sense to me. You have a way of turning a phrase using odd and profound words. I wish you would answer your reviews as I never know if I understand your thoughts or not....chey
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Hi Al,
I got a bit lost in your words but I do understand what you mean. I had to read it twice before it made sense to me. You have a way of turning a phrase using odd and profound words. I wish you would answer your reviews as I never know if I understand your thoughts or not....chey
Comment Written 04-Aug-2013
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
I agree that life is governed by fate
but hope that Heaven is a far better
place than here on earth - and only
God will decide if we are to enter
through those gates.
Margaret
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I agree that life is governed by fate
but hope that Heaven is a far better
place than here on earth - and only
God will decide if we are to enter
through those gates.
Margaret
Comment Written 04-Aug-2013
Comment from emjaihammond
What is a Fate Qualifier? I'm a bit lost in this one. Is a fate qualifier something that makes you acceptable in God's eyes? I believe only Jesus can do that. I am not sure what you are trying to say.
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What is a Fate Qualifier? I'm a bit lost in this one. Is a fate qualifier something that makes you acceptable in God's eyes? I believe only Jesus can do that. I am not sure what you are trying to say.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2013
Comment from garrymc5
Here are your writing problems:
---FATE qualifier is not a know phase. Therefore the reader must guess, or you must explain.
the FATE. ---is also not a know phase. Same again
as per God words. ---you mean God's?
to answer to follow explanation, --- impossible to answer, to follow explanation. Rewrite.
There are different categories of inhabitants in Heaven. --This is pure speculation. If it is to have any meaning, it must be explain.
There is no story tellings sense to the work. Take a look at other writes, the top three, for example, to see how story is told. Learn from them.
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Here are your writing problems:
---FATE qualifier is not a know phase. Therefore the reader must guess, or you must explain.
the FATE. ---is also not a know phase. Same again
as per God words. ---you mean God's?
to answer to follow explanation, --- impossible to answer, to follow explanation. Rewrite.
There are different categories of inhabitants in Heaven. --This is pure speculation. If it is to have any meaning, it must be explain.
There is no story tellings sense to the work. Take a look at other writes, the top three, for example, to see how story is told. Learn from them.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2013
Comment from c_lucas
The way you live your life will decide your after life. This is uniquely written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
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The way you live your life will decide your after life. This is uniquely written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2013
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer delivers a message filled with knowledge, wisdom and understanding. The message in this piece is deep and serves as a blue print to the Father. I see no typos or errors nor anything I would change in this piece. Good job.
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The writer delivers a message filled with knowledge, wisdom and understanding. The message in this piece is deep and serves as a blue print to the Father. I see no typos or errors nor anything I would change in this piece. Good job.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2013