All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Soul's Voice"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from elliejean
I love the poem. I believe in reincarnation. I have seen too many children being born old in the ways of wisdom. I believe God gives our souls a chance to live again. At least until we get it right. Great work.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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I love the poem. I believe in reincarnation. I have seen too many children being born old in the ways of wisdom. I believe God gives our souls a chance to live again. At least until we get it right. Great work.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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Thx so much elliejean ... I also believe that - we'll get it "right" yet, right? :) Sharyn
Comment from McMurry903
Very creative! I really enjoyed the unique approach you took with this and you crafted a very good poem in the process. Well done, I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Very creative! I really enjoyed the unique approach you took with this and you crafted a very good poem in the process. Well done, I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Thank you SO much McM! bless you for reading and enjoying :)
Comment from Eric Corsten
Very nice..I liked this story. very descriptive and paints a nice picture. Easy to follow the dialog and easy to read. Hope to see you soon
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Very nice..I liked this story. very descriptive and paints a nice picture. Easy to follow the dialog and easy to read. Hope to see you soon
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much Eric!
Comment from Dave Russell
Such a sweetly thought out poem. The fantasy takes us on a peaceful flight. There is much that we will understand one day, but not quite yet. I completely enjoyed this. :)
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Such a sweetly thought out poem. The fantasy takes us on a peaceful flight. There is much that we will understand one day, but not quite yet. I completely enjoyed this. :)
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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thanks so much Dave! :)
Comment from justatuna
This was a beautiful poem. I don't give advice on structure as I'm no expert. But I saw excellent alliteration that created an excellent flow. This was perfect for the form of the poem as it was a silent situation. Out of body? I live out of my body. Great poem. Thanks for the great write.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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This was a beautiful poem. I don't give advice on structure as I'm no expert. But I saw excellent alliteration that created an excellent flow. This was perfect for the form of the poem as it was a silent situation. Out of body? I live out of my body. Great poem. Thanks for the great write.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Good to have you back, Rob!
Comment from steevie
A fun write about what it would be like to venture outside of our skin and check out the heavens at night when all others are sleeping. Interesting how children perceive God.
You told of an adventure that would be exciting for any kid, for his mind to take flight and see the stars for themselves
I have never had an out of body experience but I have had an out of money experience, usually a day before pay day. LOL
Good job
steve
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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A fun write about what it would be like to venture outside of our skin and check out the heavens at night when all others are sleeping. Interesting how children perceive God.
You told of an adventure that would be exciting for any kid, for his mind to take flight and see the stars for themselves
I have never had an out of body experience but I have had an out of money experience, usually a day before pay day. LOL
Good job
steve
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Thx Steve!!
Comment from yonashalom
This is so dreamy. My daughter used to tell me when she was little that she saw angels. This was at about 6 or 7 years old. It makes you wonder when little newborn babies laugh in their sleep. What are they seeing? :) The poem gives the idea of a pre-birth knowing and reincarnation, aside from the idea of an out of body experience. Good luck. ~Yona
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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This is so dreamy. My daughter used to tell me when she was little that she saw angels. This was at about 6 or 7 years old. It makes you wonder when little newborn babies laugh in their sleep. What are they seeing? :) The poem gives the idea of a pre-birth knowing and reincarnation, aside from the idea of an out of body experience. Good luck. ~Yona
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Does make you wonder, Yona, doesn't it?
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Yes, like we have this connection when we are innocent and then it fades...only to be returned if we've been good and not naughty. :)~Yona
Comment from oozer
Why shouldn't it happen that the angels would yearn to communicate with innocent little souls. A beautiful imagination you share with us here. Grateful thanks!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Why shouldn't it happen that the angels would yearn to communicate with innocent little souls. A beautiful imagination you share with us here. Grateful thanks!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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thx oozer!!
Comment from Tina McKala
This is such a perfect poem, gently whispering into ear, singing in a soft melody, it was a great experience to read your words! I loved everything about it!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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This is such a perfect poem, gently whispering into ear, singing in a soft melody, it was a great experience to read your words! I loved everything about it!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Oh thank you so much Tina - you're such a sweetheart - and I so appreciate your magic '6'. So glad you enjoyed this little piece - I loved writing it!
Comment from Angel Blessings
Beautiful poem, beautiful meaning. Loved the presentation! Good picture, good choice of background, and font colors! Thank you for sharing this lovely poem!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Beautiful poem, beautiful meaning. Loved the presentation! Good picture, good choice of background, and font colors! Thank you for sharing this lovely poem!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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My pleasure, Angel!