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Dear God



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Comment from Kingsland
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I liked the fact of how selfless this was. You just want for another and you are not worried about yourself. This was a well written short letter... John

 Comment Written 08-May-2012


reply by the author on 08-May-2012
    Thank you kindly. Blessings
Comment from joann r romei
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this was very cute, i like the realistic way you recited exactly what you wanted and how grateful you are for the simple things in your life.

 Comment Written 08-May-2012


reply by the author on 08-May-2012
    Thank you kindly. Blessings
Comment from Meta~Mark
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excellent read here and good luck in contest!

Dear God,

Thanks for allowing me to see another day.

I am grateful to you for directing me to the Fanstory web site. I have been blessed with a great friendship of one so dear by way of this site; and given the opportunity to interact with some wonderful people, excellent writers and great poets.

I write on behalf of this dear friend; she received some troublesome news regarding her health today. Please, stop by and remove her worries, fears and pains. Let her witness your healing powers.

I don't care about winning this contest, please touch, heal and deliver my friend.

Lovingly, all Honor and Glory belongs to you, in Jesus name

 Comment Written 07-May-2012


reply by the author on 07-May-2012
    Thanks for your rating and review. LOL
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
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A beautiful prayer of thanks, gratitude and concerns for others. Not a "give me, give me, give me,..." as many pray. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 07-May-2012


reply by the author on 07-May-2012
    You are so kind, thanks for your review. Blessings and LOL
Comment from purrfect tale
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This is a wonderful, caring tribute to your friend. Isn't it funny how many strong bonds can be made here where we share the writing bug.

 Comment Written 06-May-2012


reply by the author on 06-May-2012
    Thanks very kindly, it is amazing, I am so thankful to God for her friendship and for Him placing so many wonderful people in my life by way of this site. There are truly some very nice people here. Only experience few not so kind. I figure it you treat everyone with kindness and respect, even if they are not nice to you, just maybe they will get better. Blessings , LOL and have a good night.
Comment from Charlene0513
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A wonderful piece written to show empathy and a profound concern for a loved one; but also giving the thanksgiving to the spirit that is worthy for His recognition.
Charlene

 Comment Written 06-May-2012


reply by the author on 06-May-2012
    Thanks so much for your very kind review. Blessings
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Oh this is well written a plea from your heart expressed with so much feeling well done good luck in the contest regards Fuller Jill

 Comment Written 06-May-2012


reply by the author on 06-May-2012
    Thanks so kindly.
Comment from mommerry
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An unselfish request made in all humlity on behalf of another is a beautiful response to this challenge. I found no SPAG issues. I join my prayers with yours.

 Comment Written 06-May-2012


reply by the author on 06-May-2012
    Thanks for your prayers. LOL and Blessings always
Comment from Galactia
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beautiful written poem asking God to heel those close yo you that are six, so selfless.

Well done and Good Luck in the contest.

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 06-May-2012


reply by the author on 06-May-2012
    Thank you kindly.
Comment from squid152
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Your love for your friend is God's messenger that will help to heal her. Your prayers will be answered in your faith in the Lord-squid

 Comment Written 06-May-2012


reply by the author on 06-May-2012
    Thank you kindly. LOL