Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

Good morning. I am 'way behind on reviewing. My internet service was messed up for a couple of days. This is a good one to pick up with. Also I like the nice picture of you.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your kind and thoughtful review. Have a great weekend, Ine. Thanks for the comment on the photo. Is a headache sometimes with the internet.

Comment from peggles

Excellent

Such a lovely heartfelt prayer
Your wording is wonderful and your message so right
i truly enjoyed this
It has been a pleasure to review
And a privilege to review
Well done

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your kind and thoughtful review. Have a nice weekend, Ine

Comment from Dougspoetry

Excellent

Some very truthful words of wisdom you share in this poem. A beautiful picture you have chosen to accompany your poem. Nice work!

God Bless!

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your kind and thoughtful review. Have a nice weekend, Ine

Comment from judy corcoran

Excellent

lol ine - i love that song
i'm singing along while i'm writing this so if there are heaps of typos then it'll be your fault :)
- and what gorgous kids in the video !!!

i love your poem
one suggestion only - don't put a space after the first letter of each line...
it (lol imho) detracts from the write
and the acrostic should really be unnoticable / subtle...

thanks for sharing
love judy

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and love. Ine. Thanks for the tip- will change that.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

A strong acrostic for Thoughts/Religion
You offer good moral/spiritual advice about how to lead a life in accordance with the teachings of Jesus about love and compassion :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine

Comment from rheabug

Excellent

This is a very nice acrostic. I enjoyed reading your presentation. The art work that you chose goes well with this piece. Thank you for sharing, Linda

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine

Comment from Realist101

Excellent

Hi Ine! You did an acrostic here, which is very difficult...most excellent work! IF only your words would be taken seriously by people...so many just say it, but do NOT live it...I know you are one who is true...ps...love your pix too! HUG! Susan

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine and hugs.

Comment from allborn66

Excellent

This is a very interesting piece. I like the word choice. The flow is a little stilted at times. I like acrostic poems, and this is a nice one.
Barbara

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine

Comment from ulster3

Excellent

Hello robina.
I wish you well with this marvellous acrostic.
As you may be aware, in all my time on FS I have never done copied reviews or thanks for a review received. Unfortunately, I'm so far behind at this time I have little choice to do otherwise.
Please know I have read your work, and as always, enjoyed it very much. Please excuse the lack of individual comment, but if I had not liked it you would not receive this.
Fondly, and with regret for a long negligence to the site and your good work...Rebecca

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine

Comment from Matoshka

Excellent

I loved your picture and your words my friend. He is near as a breath and will him we are never alone. Forgiving your enemies is sometimes hard, but so necessary, his love will always get us though. Blessings and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine. Thanks for good luck wishes.

reply by Matoshka on 03-Nov-2011

You are so welcome Ine. I enjoyed it so much. Blessings my friend.