CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Galleries of Treasure"A collection of poetry
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Comment from PatriciaLiteHickman
This is a very clever septolet and grand tribute too! well done; best wishes in the voting booth; I think it's a strong entry!
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This is a very clever septolet and grand tribute too! well done; best wishes in the voting booth; I think it's a strong entry!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from RADIO
The masters live on in their
beautiful creations as we will
forever more stand in awe of
their talent. One of my favorite
visits in France was to the house
of Monet.
Radio
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The masters live on in their
beautiful creations as we will
forever more stand in awe of
their talent. One of my favorite
visits in France was to the house
of Monet.
Radio
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from Brandenpaul
Well Sue, you definately created the picture as the rules stated. I admire your courage to write within the rules and they all seem so easy for you. We all seem to be in awe of some master of something each day. I think you captured this wonderfully.
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Well Sue, you definately created the picture as the rules stated. I admire your courage to write within the rules and they all seem so easy for you. We all seem to be in awe of some master of something each day. I think you captured this wonderfully.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
This is really a very fine septolet! No picture required...great imagery in your words. Good luck in the contest! Hugs and smiles, Susanne
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This is really a very fine septolet! No picture required...great imagery in your words. Good luck in the contest! Hugs and smiles, Susanne
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from tammipratt
You have managed to weave a great message into this prose - well done. No spelling, grammar or punctuation errors that I could see from here. Good luck in the competition.
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You have managed to weave a great message into this prose - well done. No spelling, grammar or punctuation errors that I could see from here. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from glacierbabe
Very well done, Sue. I love classic art and this paints a beautiful picture of the Masters' art. Many different ones come to mind but still excellently done. Best of luck with the contest. Cheryl :)
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Very well done, Sue. I love classic art and this paints a beautiful picture of the Masters' art. Many different ones come to mind but still excellently done. Best of luck with the contest. Cheryl :)
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from JoeKarbo
I like this style of structured poetry.
I can envision the paintings and masters within the lines...
Your choice of subject matter is contemporary and well chosen.
Very well done.
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I like this style of structured poetry.
I can envision the paintings and masters within the lines...
Your choice of subject matter is contemporary and well chosen.
Very well done.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from Fleedleflump
Not just one image, but many! You've created a pace with your word choices (especially "leaving legacies
of genius") that sets this apart from most of the others; it's fast, rhythmical, and still achieves its aim.
Mike
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Not just one image, but many! You've created a pace with your word choices (especially "leaving legacies
of genius") that sets this apart from most of the others; it's fast, rhythmical, and still achieves its aim.
Mike
Comment Written 20-Mar-2009
Comment from pilarblue
This is a very cool Septolet poem. I enjoy your work very much, Sixteezkid! Thank you very much for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)
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This is a very cool Septolet poem. I enjoy your work very much, Sixteezkid! Thank you very much for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 20-Mar-2009
Comment from demelzadreamer
this was really simple. Simple is good in my case. I have the attention span of a goldfish. So I actually was able to focus on this piece. It was well written and painted a beautiful picture for me. thanks.
I am, yours most sincerely,
DemelzaDreamer
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this was really simple. Simple is good in my case. I have the attention span of a goldfish. So I actually was able to focus on this piece. It was well written and painted a beautiful picture for me. thanks.
I am, yours most sincerely,
DemelzaDreamer
Comment Written 20-Mar-2009