CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Joan E.
The triolet is a good vehicle for your tribute to Mozart with its powerful repeats. I liked the sheet music picture along side the image you created of his quill in his hand.
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The triolet is a good vehicle for your tribute to Mozart with its powerful repeats. I liked the sheet music picture along side the image you created of his quill in his hand.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2009
Comment from howling harp
great job. this is more difficult that it looks as the repetition cold easily get stale. i loved the way it almost created a godly attitude to the piece. really great!!
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great job. this is more difficult that it looks as the repetition cold easily get stale. i loved the way it almost created a godly attitude to the piece. really great!!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2009
Comment from rmdelta
Sue,
wow, what a nice writing, my dear friend. Excellent contest entry, Sue, and surely a writng the other contestants have to beat. Well done.
Reggie
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2009
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Sue,
wow, what a nice writing, my dear friend. Excellent contest entry, Sue, and surely a writng the other contestants have to beat. Well done.
Reggie
Comment Written 08-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2009
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Well, Reggie....this was the OTHER poem I mentioned that I missed on the contest deadline. Dang it!! But thanks for your great review! Excuse me while I now go into shock that you liked the "tree-o-lay" LOL!! Sue :-))
Comment from skye
Not only a poet, but a music lover too.
Great poem paying tribute to one of my favorite composers.
Your lines are perfect, your imagery strong.
Very well done.
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Not only a poet, but a music lover too.
Great poem paying tribute to one of my favorite composers.
Your lines are perfect, your imagery strong.
Very well done.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
Comment from findingmyroom
You have captured the essence of timeless music "Eternal is your gift of art." I was a little skeptical about how interesting something in the Triolet form could be, given the lines that repeat so close together, but you chose a subject that is also always fresh: how music is an integral partof life.
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You have captured the essence of timeless music "Eternal is your gift of art." I was a little skeptical about how interesting something in the Triolet form could be, given the lines that repeat so close together, but you chose a subject that is also always fresh: how music is an integral partof life.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Very well done again this reads so well and I liked this it is very well presented and a good contest entry good luck in the contest regards Fuller
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Very well done again this reads so well and I liked this it is very well presented and a good contest entry good luck in the contest regards Fuller
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
Comment from LauraKatherine
This is a good tribute to Mozart.
I like the line "I hold your music in my heart." Beautiful phrasing. I also liked the rhyme: heart/Mozart/art. It sums up the poem's intention, I believe.
Just on a side note, I'm currently reading a novel called _Mozart's Sister_, who, of course, was quite a musician and composer herself but was supressed by her family and culture from cultivating her gifts. So Mozart's been on my mind!
Good job. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest. Laura
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This is a good tribute to Mozart.
I like the line "I hold your music in my heart." Beautiful phrasing. I also liked the rhyme: heart/Mozart/art. It sums up the poem's intention, I believe.
Just on a side note, I'm currently reading a novel called _Mozart's Sister_, who, of course, was quite a musician and composer herself but was supressed by her family and culture from cultivating her gifts. So Mozart's been on my mind!
Good job. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest. Laura
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
Comment from Dklrdmcches
a different piece then I am used to reviewing. your genious showed throughout this very intriguing and sophisticated poem. great imagination was also felt as the flow of this piece made for an enjoyable read...DKLRD
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a different piece then I am used to reviewing. your genious showed throughout this very intriguing and sophisticated poem. great imagination was also felt as the flow of this piece made for an enjoyable read...DKLRD
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
Comment from aviddbrut
great job sixteezkid. looks like you crafted this troilet perfectly. you also picked a great subjec to write about, Herr Mozart. a wonderful ode to a wonderful artist.
david
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great job sixteezkid. looks like you crafted this troilet perfectly. you also picked a great subjec to write about, Herr Mozart. a wonderful ode to a wonderful artist.
david
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi sixteezkid. This is a very well written tribute to Mozart in triolet style. Yuo have executed the rhythm and rhyme scheme very well. Good luck
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Hi sixteezkid. This is a very well written tribute to Mozart in triolet style. Yuo have executed the rhythm and rhyme scheme very well. Good luck
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009