Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 69 "The Hammer Strikes"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, this woman had determination here and the guy didn't stand a chance, she got the first blow in and survived, and how is she going to explain this premeditated murder? That must be in the next chapter! Much enjoyed, I was entertained, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Oh my goodness, this woman had determination here and the guy didn't stand a chance, she got the first blow in and survived, and how is she going to explain this premeditated murder? That must be in the next chapter! Much enjoyed, I was entertained, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Dolly, she is the victim and is trying to secure her escape. Self defense. Hope you enjoy the next chapter and thank you so much for your feedback.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed this chapter! The way you built suspense kept me hooked! Aliss's struggle felt so real. She really had to fight for her survival. The moment when she connects with him was powerful. I especially liked the little details like her shaking legs and the way you showed her fear but also her strength. I can't wait to read more! Keep going - you've got a great thing here!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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I really enjoyed this chapter! The way you built suspense kept me hooked! Aliss's struggle felt so real. She really had to fight for her survival. The moment when she connects with him was powerful. I especially liked the little details like her shaking legs and the way you showed her fear but also her strength. I can't wait to read more! Keep going - you've got a great thing here!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Thank you Michael! Here comes one more!
