Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "Detective Martin"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
3 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Great dialogue in this one, that's what work good separation. It's you know, which is a punctuation?Well, i'm a spelling for a sentence structure. It does take a while to put together. Are you well done both such as this? Hi, detective Martin like Kerry. Great character.Build all your characters very well fleshed out. Great job!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Great dialogue in this one, that's what work good separation. It's you know, which is a punctuation?Well, i'm a spelling for a sentence structure. It does take a while to put together. Are you well done both such as this? Hi, detective Martin like Kerry. Great character.Build all your characters very well fleshed out. Great job!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Your sentences are jumbled....but thank you for the stars....see you in Austin!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Interesting how you can be perceived as a sloppy professional in the task force:"I can tell you that Anderson is an average cop, somewhat sloppy. Not particularly good at attention to detail. He misses a lot of crime scene evidence and we have had to return to crime scenes he had sait were clear and subsequently found more evidence on cases that he had missed. He will be under review once we finish these open missing persons cases." Terry offered. "What can you tell me about his work ethic here?" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writtings.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Interesting how you can be perceived as a sloppy professional in the task force:"I can tell you that Anderson is an average cop, somewhat sloppy. Not particularly good at attention to detail. He misses a lot of crime scene evidence and we have had to return to crime scenes he had sait were clear and subsequently found more evidence on cases that he had missed. He will be under review once we finish these open missing persons cases." Terry offered. "What can you tell me about his work ethic here?" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writtings.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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when you read the whole story, it makes more sense. However, thank you for your comments!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I can tell how much effort and research you've put into your story, and it really pays off! The dialogue feels natural. I love how you build tension without over explaining. The mystery surrounding Anderson and the missing persons case is interesting - I'm very interested in what's going on here! Your attention to detail, especially in how police work is done, makes everything feel authentic. Keep going - this is shaping up to be a fantastic read!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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I can tell how much effort and research you've put into your story, and it really pays off! The dialogue feels natural. I love how you build tension without over explaining. The mystery surrounding Anderson and the missing persons case is interesting - I'm very interested in what's going on here! Your attention to detail, especially in how police work is done, makes everything feel authentic. Keep going - this is shaping up to be a fantastic read!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Thank you Michael this has taken a year to write and its almost done!
