Burn It All Down
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your story really grips me from the start! I love how you create such a tense atmosphere with the sense of being watched-it kept me on edge. The way you reveal the global scale of the operation through the map is brilliant. And the urgency in Grayson and Alex's actions pulls me right in.
The cliffhanger at the end leaves me wanting to know what happens next - exciting stuff! Keep it up, I'm hooked!
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Your story really grips me from the start! I love how you create such a tense atmosphere with the sense of being watched-it kept me on edge. The way you reveal the global scale of the operation through the map is brilliant. And the urgency in Grayson and Alex's actions pulls me right in.
The cliffhanger at the end leaves me wanting to know what happens next - exciting stuff! Keep it up, I'm hooked!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
