Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 58 "Mark - what is he hiding?"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This chapter had me hooked from start to finish! I love how you built the tension with the locked doors and Detective Smythe's sharp instincts. The details made everything feel so mysterious and kept me guessing about Dr. Conners. I really felt the urgency in Terry's actions. You created such a
suspenseful atmosphere - it was thrilling!
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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This chapter had me hooked from start to finish! I love how you built the tension with the locked doors and Detective Smythe's sharp instincts. The details made everything feel so mysterious and kept me guessing about Dr. Conners. I really felt the urgency in Terry's actions. You created such a
suspenseful atmosphere - it was thrilling!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Michael - thank you so much. I really appreciate any and all feedback.
I strive to make my writing get 6 stars but more importantly that the reader likes the tale.
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Thank you for your review and stars! I appreciate all the feedback
Comment from Lea Tonin1
There she goes again with her literary excellence! Articulate, descriptive, smart. All bases covered. The dialogue's really good too. The separations are made between description and dialogue, which is exactly what's needed.So your formatting is great too! Awesome jobThere's only one thing that can be done with such a piece of writing as this!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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There she goes again with her literary excellence! Articulate, descriptive, smart. All bases covered. The dialogue's really good too. The separations are made between description and dialogue, which is exactly what's needed.So your formatting is great too! Awesome jobThere's only one thing that can be done with such a piece of writing as this!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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WOW THANK YOU!
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Thank you for your review and stars! I appreciate all the feedback
