Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "More Clues"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love how your story builds tension! The way you've got Aliss digging through her husband's files kept me hooked. I especially liked the little details, like her finding the children's book with secret notes inside - it adds such a fun twist. Your writing really draws me in with Aliss's determination to figure out what's going on. The moment she connects the dots between Cindra and her son's school was a great reveal! I can't wait to see what happens next - you're keeping the suspense high. Keep up the awesome work!
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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I love how your story builds tension! The way you've got Aliss digging through her husband's files kept me hooked. I especially liked the little details, like her finding the children's book with secret notes inside - it adds such a fun twist. Your writing really draws me in with Aliss's determination to figure out what's going on. The moment she connects the dots between Cindra and her son's school was a great reveal! I can't wait to see what happens next - you're keeping the suspense high. Keep up the awesome work!
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Michael! thank you! these comments keep me writing!
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written chapter in your book and I enjoy listening to it very much. It flows very well when it is read aloud. Your sentence structure and your paragraphing are excellent. May you have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you. Merry Christmas, Pa
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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This is a very well written chapter in your book and I enjoy listening to it very much. It flows very well when it is read aloud. Your sentence structure and your paragraphing are excellent. May you have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you. Merry Christmas, Pa
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you again Patricia
