Identity is never lost
Rispetto10 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Roy,
This is a lovely Rispetto Penn. I especially like the last two lines.
I have a great-nephew Jeremiah. He loves his biblical name.
Wonderful work, Roy.
Good luck with this poem.
Blessings,
Cindy
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Roy,
This is a lovely Rispetto Penn. I especially like the last two lines.
I have a great-nephew Jeremiah. He loves his biblical name.
Wonderful work, Roy.
Good luck with this poem.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a thoughtful poem, Roy. Our identity is in Jesus, who made us and gave us eternal life. I like the first couplet of the second stanza, especially 'He bathes you in His grace and light.' A nice Rispetto with good rhymes and great rhythm. Blessings. Carol
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This is a thoughtful poem, Roy. Our identity is in Jesus, who made us and gave us eternal life. I like the first couplet of the second stanza, especially 'He bathes you in His grace and light.' A nice Rispetto with good rhymes and great rhythm. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, God has a plan for each of us. He knew us before we were born. BUT! He gave us each our own free will, that's what gets us into trouble. If we follow God's guidance for us we will return to Him in heaven. Thank you for sharing this inspired poem with us.
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Yes, God has a plan for each of us. He knew us before we were born. BUT! He gave us each our own free will, that's what gets us into trouble. If we follow God's guidance for us we will return to Him in heaven. Thank you for sharing this inspired poem with us.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
Comment from Begin Again
God created each of his in his own unique way and blessed us if only we followed his plan. We set our children free to follow their own path too...and hope that they not forgotten where their light comes from.
Please don't miss my post today. It's very special to me and I can't wait to share it. Have a terrific day! Smiles and hugs, Carol
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God created each of his in his own unique way and blessed us if only we followed his plan. We set our children free to follow their own path too...and hope that they not forgotten where their light comes from.
Please don't miss my post today. It's very special to me and I can't wait to share it. Have a terrific day! Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
Comment from patcelaw
We all were wonderfully created in the womb by the love and grace of God, and we should all enjoy life and know that our identity will remain that which God would have to be. Patricia.
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We all were wonderfully created in the womb by the love and grace of God, and we should all enjoy life and know that our identity will remain that which God would have to be. Patricia.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
Comment from Tim Margetts
Roy, I love this form.
Simple with a natural structure that lends itself to deep thoughts in a short space, without the constraint's of a haiku, it has the time to better illustrate the message of the words.
Thank you for sharing
Tim
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Roy, I love this form.
Simple with a natural structure that lends itself to deep thoughts in a short space, without the constraint's of a haiku, it has the time to better illustrate the message of the words.
Thank you for sharing
Tim
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
Comment from Lana Marie
I enjoy reading your poetry and learning new styles. As a parent this brings a warm feeling in my heart. As a Christian, these words give a reassurance of God's love.
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I enjoy reading your poetry and learning new styles. As a parent this brings a warm feeling in my heart. As a Christian, these words give a reassurance of God's love.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
Comment from Sally Law
I feel like the people of the world at present are struggling with their identities. Some don't even know what sex they are. My plain talking niece said it so well. "Just look in you pants!" Even a child understands identities. In Christ, we identify with Him: His life, death, resurrection and second coming. We identify with those who are a part of the body, His bride, the church.
Beautiful wee poem with an important message for today.
Sending along my very best,
Sal Xos
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I feel like the people of the world at present are struggling with their identities. Some don't even know what sex they are. My plain talking niece said it so well. "Just look in you pants!" Even a child understands identities. In Christ, we identify with Him: His life, death, resurrection and second coming. We identify with those who are a part of the body, His bride, the church.
Beautiful wee poem with an important message for today.
Sending along my very best,
Sal Xos
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
Comment from RJ Heritage
We are created a individual unique in God's sight, and He has a good plan for our lives, if only we follow it. Thanks for sharing these beautiful thoughts. Blessings to you and yours.
RJ
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We are created a individual unique in God's sight, and He has a good plan for our lives, if only we follow it. Thanks for sharing these beautiful thoughts. Blessings to you and yours.
RJ
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
Comment from Alex Biasin
I liked this.
It seemed to flow nicely and had a good rhythm to it.
I do not know much about poetry, so I can't give any valid advice or criticism, I just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed the poem.
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I liked this.
It seemed to flow nicely and had a good rhythm to it.
I do not know much about poetry, so I can't give any valid advice or criticism, I just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed the poem.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024