The Poets Menagerie
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 " Night Flight"A collection of poems
9 total reviews
Comment from Colorado Owl
I like the image that your words paint. Aren't we always disguising pieces of our self, choosing only to display what we want others to see? Thank you!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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I like the image that your words paint. Aren't we always disguising pieces of our self, choosing only to display what we want others to see? Thank you!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Thank you again for reading and for writing and for enjoying.I appreciate it very much. Thank you for your kind review and your great rating too. And hope you have awesome day. Thanks!
Comment from Tim Margetts
An interesting entry that had me read it over two or three times, - not many do that.
I enjoyed the way you made me consider you as a person, fragile and diaphanous as a bubble, yet free to float and drift on the winds of life, hiding within an outer shell.
Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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An interesting entry that had me read it over two or three times, - not many do that.
I enjoyed the way you made me consider you as a person, fragile and diaphanous as a bubble, yet free to float and drift on the winds of life, hiding within an outer shell.
Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much Tim. You have a keen insight! Thank you for your time too as well. For reading, writing and rating have the best day, I hope!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Souring in our dreams helps us to be refreshed at dawn and I enjoyed your whimsical poem Lea and glad to see you branching out here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Souring in our dreams helps us to be refreshed at dawn and I enjoyed your whimsical poem Lea and glad to see you branching out here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Thank you Dolly! thank you again. Could you take a break from one project and do a little bit on another. To return again refreshed.
Thanks toy.I hope you and yours are well.You're having a good day!
Comment from DonandVicki
Your short poem has done what all good poetry should do, and that is give the readers mind a was to explore the meaning of your words. No two mind will discover same thing.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Your short poem has done what all good poetry should do, and that is give the readers mind a was to explore the meaning of your words. No two mind will discover same thing.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thank you, donald.I appreciate your words.And that's an interesting Take on it. Thank you for stopping in for a read. I very much appreciate that and your favorite find review. Have a great night!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I think we all wear masks at times, and often those who seem to be the most bubbly underneath the bubbles have burst. A beautiful presentation for your 5-7-5 poem, Lea. Well done,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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I think we all wear masks at times, and often those who seem to be the most bubbly underneath the bubbles have burst. A beautiful presentation for your 5-7-5 poem, Lea. Well done,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Valda, nice to see your words here! Thanks for your great review.I'm glad you liked it.I hope you and yours are well.Are you gearing up for thanksgiving, i'm sure! I hope it's a great one. Thank you again!
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I'm an Australian so no thanksgiving., but enjoy yours.
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Home canadian ours was done last month.
Comment from Neonewman
Oh, the masks we wear indeed. This is an excellent entry for this particular writing prompt, Lea. I enjoy short poetry such as this--best of luck in the voting.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Oh, the masks we wear indeed. This is an excellent entry for this particular writing prompt, Lea. I enjoy short poetry such as this--best of luck in the voting.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you Steve! Very kind of you. Hope you have a wonderful evening!
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My pleasure, Lea. You as well.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This contest entry causes me to pause and ponder it's full meaning. That's a good thing. Taking time to think is always good. Thank you for sharing this entry with us and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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This contest entry causes me to pause and ponder it's full meaning. That's a good thing. Taking time to think is always good. Thank you for sharing this entry with us and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it! For your well wishes thanks! Have an awesome night.
Comment from kahpot
Wonderful, we do wear many masks throughout life's journey, I like to think that many of my changes have been for the good and better, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Wonderful, we do wear many masks throughout life's journey, I like to think that many of my changes have been for the good and better, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm really glad you like it and you're right about that. The masks we have for the world, and mask we have for ourselves. Thank you for your fine review. I'm really glad you like it. I hope that your day is amazing!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Hi Lea, this is all very ethereal and imaginative! It's true, though, does anyone really know our true selves beneath our changeable whims and disguises, as tangible as a bubble on the breeze. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Hi Lea, this is all very ethereal and imaginative! It's true, though, does anyone really know our true selves beneath our changeable whims and disguises, as tangible as a bubble on the breeze. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much, debbie, always a great review.Thanks you and I hope that you have the best night in. I gotta get going and start reading some stuff! Thanks again have the best evening!