Where is Heaven?
A poem5 total reviews
Comment from Luke Nicholas1
This is a very neat and tidy poem. A very jehovic way of understanding Heaven and Hell. There seems to be a lot of application of Humanity's emotional station in life. I may subscribe to very different understanding of an afterlife. One where we are not humans having spiritual experiences but rather we are spirits having a human one. I appreciate the writers use of metaphor in simile
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This is a very neat and tidy poem. A very jehovic way of understanding Heaven and Hell. There seems to be a lot of application of Humanity's emotional station in life. I may subscribe to very different understanding of an afterlife. One where we are not humans having spiritual experiences but rather we are spirits having a human one. I appreciate the writers use of metaphor in simile
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
Comment from Aussie
We as feeble humans believe there is earth, heaven and hell. Some don't believe in heaven or hell. Without faith it is impossible to please God. The Holy Bible is our guide on the path to Eternal Life. My dad once told me when I was very young, "In my Father's house there are many mansions etc." I didn't understand. I do now, God has prepared a place for me. Thanks for sharing. K xx
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We as feeble humans believe there is earth, heaven and hell. Some don't believe in heaven or hell. Without faith it is impossible to please God. The Holy Bible is our guide on the path to Eternal Life. My dad once told me when I was very young, "In my Father's house there are many mansions etc." I didn't understand. I do now, God has prepared a place for me. Thanks for sharing. K xx
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Roy,
What a beautiful poem. It rhymes nicely throughout and flows beautifully to the end. This poem has all the element of God's love for his people and their love for him.
Great job and keep them coming.
Cecilia
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Roy,
What a beautiful poem. It rhymes nicely throughout and flows beautifully to the end. This poem has all the element of God's love for his people and their love for him.
Great job and keep them coming.
Cecilia
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
Comment from DonandVicki
I think that this is the third poem of yours that I have reviewed today and they were all good but this is by far the best in my opinion. Heaven and Hell do exist. Don
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I think that this is the third poem of yours that I have reviewed today and they were all good but this is by far the best in my opinion. Heaven and Hell do exist. Don
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
Great Scripture passage to go with your thoughtful poem. I'm not sure why your poem is printed twice here. You might want to check that, and also remove all the gremlin's markings from the Scripture passage. Good rhymes and steady rhythm make this a good read. Blessings. Carol
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Great Scripture passage to go with your thoughtful poem. I'm not sure why your poem is printed twice here. You might want to check that, and also remove all the gremlin's markings from the Scripture passage. Good rhymes and steady rhythm make this a good read. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024