Love trees.
Healing therapy, if you please.2 total reviews
Comment from Patrick Bernardy
Hello!
I think you did a great job with your short poem! I especially like the instances of assonance that is created with "trees," "breathe," and "please." The entire poem when said aloud is very pleasing sonically.
I love the idea of "symbiosis" in this because it brings to mind cooperation and the importance of the connection between humans and trees. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
Patrick
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Hello!
I think you did a great job with your short poem! I especially like the instances of assonance that is created with "trees," "breathe," and "please." The entire poem when said aloud is very pleasing sonically.
I love the idea of "symbiosis" in this because it brings to mind cooperation and the importance of the connection between humans and trees. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
Patrick
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thank you for kind feedback.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed these inventive few words for the contest as we interact with trees with our appreciation. Trees outlive us and bring joy to the planet, I enjoyed your 5-7-5, good luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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I enjoyed these inventive few words for the contest as we interact with trees with our appreciation. Trees outlive us and bring joy to the planet, I enjoyed your 5-7-5, good luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much.