A Room Of My Own
Memories5 total reviews
Comment from Brooke MacKenzie
Ohhhh I love this!! Now I want so much more of this room and narrator! I like the detail about the filet k Ives coming from Germany. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Ohhhh I love this!! Now I want so much more of this room and narrator! I like the detail about the filet k Ives coming from Germany. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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People had been commenting that I wasn't being bloosy enough. So, I hope this solved that! Karen
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I admit that I skimmed toward the end; a little bit of graphic goes a long way. Not sure who the butcher is, but I hope I never piss him off!
As this is a horror writing contest, this should fit the bill. Between the picture and the details of what will happen on that table, it's a horror, alright!
Good luck,
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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I admit that I skimmed toward the end; a little bit of graphic goes a long way. Not sure who the butcher is, but I hope I never piss him off!
As this is a horror writing contest, this should fit the bill. Between the picture and the details of what will happen on that table, it's a horror, alright!
Good luck,
xo
Pam
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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THanks for the read. Whoever said the butcher was a man?
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They usually are:-)
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Just the ones that are
caught :-)
Comment from papa55mike
Nicely done! I have only one suggestion. If you could describe a couple of the tools and what they do would be a nice touch. What a wonderfully written story. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Nicely done! I have only one suggestion. If you could describe a couple of the tools and what they do would be a nice touch. What a wonderfully written story. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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I edited, just for you. Thanks for the read. I think you were right.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness this is a terrifying and blood thirsty, murderous threat here and I may even have nightmares now after reading. This certainly is a chamber of horror, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Oh my goodness this is a terrifying and blood thirsty, murderous threat here and I may even have nightmares now after reading. This certainly is a chamber of horror, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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People had been complaining I wasn't bloody enough anymore. I bet this changed their minds. THanks for the read. Really? I creeped you out? Thank you.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow! This piece is chilling in the best possible way. Your use of imagery really pulls the reader into the dark and twisted world you've created! It's so unsettling and interesting! I love the idea of eyes being the windows to the soul. Great job!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Wow! This piece is chilling in the best possible way. Your use of imagery really pulls the reader into the dark and twisted world you've created! It's so unsettling and interesting! I love the idea of eyes being the windows to the soul. Great job!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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People kept insisting I was writing too nice. They liked my stories, but they missed the gore. So, for Halloween I put on my butcher's apron and waders. I appreciate the read.