An Enigmatic Egret
for the WITTY ANIMAL contest6 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, sir, "The 'pun-ier' the funnier. A witty bird with legs that fit. Thanks for sharing another fine poem. It's always a pleasure to see what you'll come up with next.
  |
Yes, sir, "The 'pun-ier' the funnier. A witty bird with legs that fit. Thanks for sharing another fine poem. It's always a pleasure to see what you'll come up with next.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jim,
This is a good haiku about this egret patiently waiting for his/her dinner that it seems to be eating in the second picture.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
|
Hi Jim,
This is a good haiku about this egret patiently waiting for his/her dinner that it seems to be eating in the second picture.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. Egrets are interesting birds. I have enjoyed watching them when we're visiting the Gulf Coast. Good luck with this entry.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
|
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. Egrets are interesting birds. I have enjoyed watching them when we're visiting the Gulf Coast. Good luck with this entry.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
-
Daily I find pleasure spotting all the egrets and sea birds around our grounds.
Comment from F. William Lester
Egrets are beautiful birds except for the object of their hunt. Patience always wins out. I remember them from a tour in Japan. Fantastic to watch. Thanks for sharing your work and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
|
Egrets are beautiful birds except for the object of their hunt. Patience always wins out. I remember them from a tour in Japan. Fantastic to watch. Thanks for sharing your work and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
-
Thank you for sharing your memories and fine words.
-
You're welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine post as you pay tribute to this lone bird with much history and experience that we know nothing about, I enjoyed your imaginative post Jim, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
|
A fine post as you pay tribute to this lone bird with much history and experience that we know nothing about, I enjoyed your imaginative post Jim, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
-
Thank you. I enjoy potting all the egrets and sea birds on our grounds.
Comment from shelley kaye
this isn't in the contest. . . did you mean it to be?
message tom and he will fix it for you. . .
a great witty animal poem
suggestion - put "patient" first with dash after the first line---
patient lone egret---
solitary beauty has
her stories to tell...
just a thought! ;-)
cute poem! thank you for sharing and good luck!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
|
this isn't in the contest. . . did you mean it to be?
message tom and he will fix it for you. . .
a great witty animal poem
suggestion - put "patient" first with dash after the first line---
patient lone egret---
solitary beauty has
her stories to tell...
just a thought! ;-)
cute poem! thank you for sharing and good luck!
shelley :)
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
-
Thank you. I could not get the contest to accept it so I told Tom and he put it in.
