2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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6 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Sadly, the background is so dark that the text gets rather lost. I can read it but it would help if the font could be more visible. This is a haunting scene and verse that capture the tragedy of battle which lives on from the past. Excellently done! Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Sadly, the background is so dark that the text gets rather lost. I can read it but it would help if the font could be more visible. This is a haunting scene and verse that capture the tragedy of battle which lives on from the past. Excellently done! Take care Debbie
Comment Written 19-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Mark D. R.
GBR,
I especially like your artwork which goes hand in hand with your verse. Of course, I favor your alliterative touches.
Mark
P.S. "battle cry" appears in my view to be a smaller font size - intentional or not?
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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GBR,
I especially like your artwork which goes hand in hand with your verse. Of course, I favor your alliterative touches.
Mark
P.S. "battle cry" appears in my view to be a smaller font size - intentional or not?
Comment Written 19-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Our battlefields are all hallow. I wish our governments would understand that wars solve nothing. I pray one day there with be peace on earth. Thank you. This presentation is perfect.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Our battlefields are all hallow. I wish our governments would understand that wars solve nothing. I pray one day there with be peace on earth. Thank you. This presentation is perfect.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 Barbara. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
All I know about this war field is that it mythical. Your words are somber and brings to mind the destructive nature of man.
Thanks for posting. Have a great weekend
RJ
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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All I know about this war field is that it mythical. Your words are somber and brings to mind the destructive nature of man.
Thanks for posting. Have a great weekend
RJ
Comment Written 19-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Oh if only all those fields of war simply wither away and peace would be restored to all people! A lovely use of alliteration in your poem! May all the wars cease!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
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Oh if only all those fields of war simply wither away and peace would be restored to all people! A lovely use of alliteration in your poem! May all the wars cease!
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
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Yes, one day we'll be more civil and kind with eachther, animals, and pour planet.
Thank you very much, big sister.
❤️ Marival
I wish you a happy weekend 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
oooh
this
was
cool.
i think it gives more power to each word
question: does it have to be in all caps?
anyway, a great haiku with excellent imagery and smooth flow
cool pics, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
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oooh
this
was
cool.
i think it gives more power to each word
question: does it have to be in all caps?
anyway, a great haiku with excellent imagery and smooth flow
cool pics, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
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It doesn't have to be all caps, I just wanted that effect.
Thank you very much, Shelley 😊
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ahh. okay! the caps do fit the theme 😊👍
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The main reason was to make it look like the Japanese letters, of course it's different but has that look.