2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 95 "Lullaby My Baby".
15 total reviews
Comment from ESOSTINE
Beautifully penned poem with lyrical tone and pace. I will learn to recite and sing this song, and use it for my little baby too. Thanks for sharing your creative work. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Beautifully penned poem with lyrical tone and pace. I will learn to recite and sing this song, and use it for my little baby too. Thanks for sharing your creative work. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
What a beautiful picture you've shared. This is an excellent entry for the Share a Photo poetry contest. The poem is something she will cherish when she is older. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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What a beautiful picture you've shared. This is an excellent entry for the Share a Photo poetry contest. The poem is something she will cherish when she is older. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Lullaby My Baby, comes from the heart of the matriarch and hopes to aid the youngest baby with the nameless, erratic, and sometimes scary denizens of phantasm.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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This free verse, Lullaby My Baby, comes from the heart of the matriarch and hopes to aid the youngest baby with the nameless, erratic, and sometimes scary denizens of phantasm.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I remember walking plenty of floors at night trying to get my boys to sleep. I'd think I have them asleep and then as soon as I gently laid them in their cribs, they's wake up. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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I remember walking plenty of floors at night trying to get my boys to sleep. I'd think I have them asleep and then as soon as I gently laid them in their cribs, they's wake up. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, and if I didn't know better I'd say you are kind of attached to her. Isn't it funny the effect they have on our lives without trying?
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and if I didn't know better I'd say you are kind of attached to her. Isn't it funny the effect they have on our lives without trying?
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Mike
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Begin Again
One of life's most precious gifts - our children and our grandchildren. a lullaby poem filled with extra splashes of love and tenderness. Very well written and appreciated.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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One of life's most precious gifts - our children and our grandchildren. a lullaby poem filled with extra splashes of love and tenderness. Very well written and appreciated.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Carol
Gypsy 😊
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Beautiful picture!
Comment from lyenochka
This is so cute! Thanks so much for sharing that precious picture. I thought the baby was a doll! I love seeing your picture as a very young grandma! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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This is so cute! Thanks so much for sharing that precious picture. I thought the baby was a doll! I love seeing your picture as a very young grandma! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Bella looked like a doll, she is so pretty. The little girl in Monsters.ink looked like her. Now she is a beautiful young woman.
Love ❤️
Marival
Comment from Wendy G
A gentle and sweet lullaby with a softly flowing subject matter as suits both the theme and the photo. The language is soothing and comforting, and is filled with love. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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A gentle and sweet lullaby with a softly flowing subject matter as suits both the theme and the photo. The language is soothing and comforting, and is filled with love. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Wendy
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
cute! love the design below the pic, too!
a beautiful lullaby flowing smoothly hoping to soon hear baby zzzz's...
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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cute! love the design below the pic, too!
a beautiful lullaby flowing smoothly hoping to soon hear baby zzzz's...
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully written poem, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. One line stands out to me and that's playing with his baby feet. I think there's nothing really more adorable and then seeing a baby in its crib and it's playing with its feet. That is just a precious moment. Patricia.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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This is a beautifully written poem, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. One line stands out to me and that's playing with his baby feet. I think there's nothing really more adorable and then seeing a baby in its crib and it's playing with its feet. That is just a precious moment. Patricia.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
Gypsy