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Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
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I loved your free verse poem of the words of Jesus from the New Testament. There's a wealth of wisdom and love in these promises of Jesus, and you presented them extraordinarily well.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs 😊

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Bill Schott
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This aquarian poem, For You, has the proper formatting and imagines God's endless assurance of His protection, both now, in the times we live in, and forever more.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, Bill

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Ulla
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Hola Marival. I take it that by now you do know that I'm not religious in any sense or form. But I do respect those who are. Thanks a lot for sharing this wonderful poem. Un abrazo, Ulla xx

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
    I respect all religions and most of them are based on love. I don't belong to any church but I believe in a mother/father God. I respect atheists, all my children. I always allowed my kids to find their own spiritual path. They don't to church. Of course I respect your choice.

    Love ❤️

    Marival besitos y abrazos
reply by Ulla on 15-Oct-2024
    I know you do as I respect yours xxx
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi MariVal.
This is a poem about all the 'big' things Jesus did for us. I don't think he did one 'little' thing with great love. But he did everything he did with great love.
If this is supposed to be an Aquarian poem, it does not follow the rhyme scheme in you notes.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful rest of the week
Joan

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
    Mother Teresa quote is about humans, not about God. I start the poem with my phrase: We are not God,
    Then Santa Teresa quote. The quote is about people doing small things with great love

    Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

    Gypsy

    Mother Teresa quote is about humans, not about God. I start the poem with my phrase: We are not God,
    Then Santa Teresa quote. The quote is about people doing small things with great love

    Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

    Gypsy
reply by dragonpoet on 16-Oct-2024
    You're welcome, MariVal.
    Joan
Comment from mermaids
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I enjoyed reading your words, it is Jesus speaking to me. There is a feeling of warmth in your words. Your poetic form strengthens your theme and your words are positive and uplifting.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from ESOSTINE
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God's love for us, humans is quite immeasurable. He is there to support u in all we do irrespective of our stinking sins. Thanks so much for sharing your inspiration.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from BethShelby
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I liked reading your aquarian spiritual poem. Christ has done so much for all of us who have chosen Him as our father. It is comforting to have Him always at our side and to know he loves us and considers us precious.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. Yes, God will do anything for us. We just need to accept Him into our lives. It's hard, I think, for humans to truly understand how much God loves us. Once again, your presentation if perfect.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very well written poem and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It has a very powerful message and we all need to take it too hard. May you have a lovely day and may your week be blessed.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
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This was perfect. No flaws, beautiful delivery. A message that will carry me through the day. All for me. Such a selfless act for someone so unworthy. Beautifully written. Gretchen

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊 Gretchen. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy