Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Thank you for participating in the haiku club event. Great entry with a good syllable count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery. It's spooky, as it should be. Well done.

suggestion: change the font color to a lighter tone... maybe light orange.

Good job,

Gypsy

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024

Thank you very much.I will keep that in mind When i use advance editor ,the font colour comes out like that...

Comment from cupa tea

Excellent

Thanks rather small but you have said it all I do believe in the short poem. Love the image you put with it as well. If you wrote it for a contest good luck!

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024

Thank you very much.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Your haiku has just enough creepy in it to make it fit perfectly with the atmosphere of Halloween without scareing us to death with the gore. I'll take the Hersheys and leave the bowl on the steps. No need to ring the bell! LOl
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024

Thank you very much

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Sanka, can't believe it is that time of
the year again...

who better to bring on Halloween night...
but a choir of bats and owls...gathered in
a darkness of death...

I love your poem sweet girl...and your picture says it all...
very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
HAPPY HALLOWEEN...

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024

Thank you very much Linda .Hugs

reply by l.raven on 22-Oct-2024

your so welcome sweet girl...
love ya...xxoo 🤗❤️🌼

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

There is an eerie feel to your words and you capture the essence of Halloween. I like the sound of a mysterious song and owls and bats, your words create a dark atmosphere.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024

Thank you very much for your support

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Your words scare me, which I believe was the point. To me it is a holiday I don't like to celebrate, but it is fun for kids and some adults. I do like decorating just to go along with the season. Great poem.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024

Thank you very much . i know it is scary

Comment from Kahlani

Excellent

Firstly, I have to say I love the picture. It's very striking-and creepy! Secondly, the poem matches the mood of the picture really well-there's a kind of creepiness in the line "Dark night sings of death." Well done, Sanku.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024

Thank you very much for your supportive review

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Nicely done. Halloween has reared it's ugly head.
I vote for "Monster Mash" as best Halloween song. And candy corn as the secretly loved, bad for your teeth candy. Karen

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024

Thank you very much. for dropping by

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A creepy night off song here as death is in the air for Halloween, a fine post for the Horror club and I enjoyed your inventive post, a chilling post, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024

Thank you very much,Dolly for your supportive review

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I'm glad that your "horror haiku" isn't so scary. I like your use of alliteration and personification of the night, And your musical theme was in every line from "sing" to "ensemble" to "song."

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024

Thank you Helen . i dont like horror much .so i just tried to be 'dark'