Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

The eyes on the lady in the artwork say she's up to no good. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading but am questioning what this young lady has on her mind. LOL My imagination is going wild.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

shouldn't it be "enchantress"?

other than that, a great horror haiku with cool imagery and pics
i like how you put the second line in green to match her drink, too
great presentation - thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

This is certainly a horror Haiku. The enchanter looks evil to me with eyes that spell intrigue. The words of your poem underscore your theme quite effectively. Than n s for sharing.
RJ

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

reply by RJ Heritage on 13-Oct-2024

You're welcome
RJ

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Marival, the minute I read this...you
and Dean's horror poems came to mind...
you two had them mastered...

harvest moon shines...the witching hour...
tis the season...

I love your poem my sweet friend...and your
picture...PERFECT...very well written you...
love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy xoxo

reply by l.raven on 13-Oct-2024

you are so welcome beautiful you...
love xxoo

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I really like the first line "harvest moon shines" as it makes me wonder what is about to be harvested come the witching hour, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024

Thank you very much, Kahpot

Gypsy 😊

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I remember seeing a movie about a coven of witches who used to dance around a fire. All I remember was a little boy seeing them and as he was watching them he made a noise and they stopped and all of them turned into cats and started chasing him. I was never a fan of cats after that. Lol. This was perfect for this season. Gretchen

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024

OMG that sounds like a creepy movie, my kind! lol

Thank you very much, Gretchen

Gypsy 😊

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Gypsy,

I always favored your horror Haiku posts. This is a good one!

Mark

P.S. If I had rewritten your verse, it would be:

harvest moon shines --
the enchanter dances in shadows
at witching hour

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024

Thank you very much, Mark. I know you like the scary ones :) me too.

Gypsy 😊 I changed it to enchantress. Thanks!

reply by Mark D. R. on 13-Oct-2024

Consider enchantress instead of enchanter - the dictionary look up is the same definition, but I think your image is the enchantress !

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Oh my! She's very pretty but very scary. I wouldn't trust her and definitely would not accept any drinks she offers. A fun Halloween poem for your horror haiku club!

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024

Hahaha... I am getting into the Halloween spirit. Our house is super decorated, we all love it. Maybe I'll take some pics and send them to you.

Thank you very much, Big Sister.

Marival 😊 😘