2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A rather haunting scene here. I like the play on death with taking your breath away as well as referring to its beauty. Yet another thoughtful and atmospheric post. Thank you, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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A rather haunting scene here. I like the play on death with taking your breath away as well as referring to its beauty. Yet another thoughtful and atmospheric post. Thank you, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
heh
love the takes my breath away,
beautiful night, and cemetery
connection -
smoothly thought-provoking flow
nice!! thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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heh
love the takes my breath away,
beautiful night, and cemetery
connection -
smoothly thought-provoking flow
nice!! thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I never thought of a cemetery as being beautiful at night, but hey, why not? Anything's possible, right? I enjoyed reading and as usual your presentation is wonderful.
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I never thought of a cemetery as being beautiful at night, but hey, why not? Anything's possible, right? I enjoyed reading and as usual your presentation is wonderful.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I smiled when I read this one, Gypsy, I find the cemetery to be very peaceful and beautiful. Taking my breath away? I leave that to my asthma which put me in hospital again. I'm recovering. I promise to try to write these now. I think this one of yours is fabulous and wish I could come up with something as good. I enjoyed it, my friend. Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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I smiled when I read this one, Gypsy, I find the cemetery to be very peaceful and beautiful. Taking my breath away? I leave that to my asthma which put me in hospital again. I'm recovering. I promise to try to write these now. I think this one of yours is fabulous and wish I could come up with something as good. I enjoyed it, my friend. Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Sandra.. I pray you will get better soon. The last line is a juxtaposition of the Beaty of the night takes my breath away and cemetery where people died taking their last breath.
Gypsy 😊
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Thank you. My asthma has not been very nice these last few years. But I have a really good asthma consultant working with me now. It has been getting me down. Thank you for the prayers, I really appreciate that. 😊xx
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I understand feeling down. I suffer from depression but in the last six years I have been doing well. I do take medication and it helps a lot.
I know the sadness that comes with grief is not the same. I had my share of grief as well.
I pray that you find peace and feel better soon.
Gypsy hugs 🙏 and blessings
Comment from lyenochka
Well, every one in the cemetery (underground) had their breath taken away before. Hopefully, the narrator will be safe and just enjoy the beauty of the autumnal night!
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Well, every one in the cemetery (underground) had their breath taken away before. Hopefully, the narrator will be safe and just enjoy the beauty of the autumnal night!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
❤️ Marival
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Beautiful Haiku. I agree completely. I used to go to some very old cemeteries especially in the fall and walk through them at night. It was so peaceful and i was never afraid to be there. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Beautiful Haiku. I agree completely. I used to go to some very old cemeteries especially in the fall and walk through them at night. It was so peaceful and i was never afraid to be there. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Marilyn
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
I like the qualifying word, 'even', for in reality only once in my life have,U actually looked at a cemetery as breathtaking. I do see how it might be thought of as bring that way. One such time was at the tomb of the Unlmown. soldier. A very sacred place. Thank you for sharing.
RJ
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I like the qualifying word, 'even', for in reality only once in my life have,U actually looked at a cemetery as breathtaking. I do see how it might be thought of as bring that way. One such time was at the tomb of the Unlmown. soldier. A very sacred place. Thank you for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ