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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from Mark D. R.
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Trump will not like your caricature!

IMHO your verse fits his fat ass and demeanor.

You paired good illustrations to pair for your presentation.

Those pits were the gooey part of carving the pumpkin's inside. We discarded those pits happily.

Mark

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, Mark

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I really like your haiku. The picture you chose was perfect with its sinister smile. The seeds of hate was such a great line. Spooky at its best. Gretchen

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
    You know I love spooky.

    Thank you very much, Gretchen

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
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AHHHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!

great haiku!! though i do think it's an insult to pumpkins LOL!

i thought that op pic looked like him...

thank you for sharing. . . and for the wednesday morning laugh!
shelley :)



 Comment Written 09-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
    LoL. I'm happy it made you laugh, that was my purpose.

    Thank you very much, Shelley 😊

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
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Gypsy,
I really like your humor haiku.
Very creepy and apt photo!
I may have met this guy in my lifetime, how did you get a photo of him! lol.
Thank you for the smile,
Gypsy,
Best wishes,
Cindy

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
    If you search funny Donald cartoon you'll get many. It's dark humor. This week in our haiku club we are writing funny haiku.

    Thank you very much, Cindy 😊

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mike Stevens
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....I'm sure I don't know who you're referring to. No, I think you're being unfair to pumpkins, well, not to the rotting ones, but....

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
    Hahaha... Shelley told me the same, poor 🎃 pumpkin.

    Thank you very much, Mike 😊

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Oh yes, I get it! Impressive likeness, not just in the image but also that memorable description: hallowed and dumb. Well done, Gypsy, for nailing it here in your seasonal verse. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, Debbie 😊

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh dear! But "pumpkin" sounds much more affectionate than "cheeto-in-chief". I wonder if he really uses that Coppertone stuff or it's a bad makeup job. I don't know if he's really that hateful - just seeds of selfishness inside.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister.

    He is getting worse and worse. He says democrats are trying to kill him and makes a baseless claim that illegal immigrants from Haiti have been eating domestic pet. Also that Biden and Harris are not helping people in Florida, which is a dangerous lie. By the way, my granddaughter lives in Florida. We are all worried about her and her doggy, Fanny. Thank God her boyfriend, Josh is with them... he is a good guy

    Trump hates everyone who doesn't adore him and treat him like a king. He makes fun of disable people and calls our captured soldier losers.

    I could go on and on. But I understand how you feel.

    Love you

    Marival 🙂
reply by lyenochka on 09-Oct-2024
    I know what you mean.

    Okay, I'm praying for safety for all in Florida. You can review Debi's poem and add your granddaughter to the list to be prayed for. Ilm praying for her safety, too! 💕🙏🙏
Comment from RJ Heritage
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An seeds that spread hatred are never good. I look at politians and I have my doubts about all of them. Some are very outspoken, others are underhanded and crafty. My vote is for Jesús Christ.
Your poem is well written and illustrated.
RJ

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, RJ

    Gypsy 😊
reply by RJ Heritage on 09-Oct-2024
    You're welcome
    RJ