Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is very well written and it flows very well when it is read aloud. I enjoyed very much listening to it. I also wish you the very best in the contest and may God bless you and may you have a wonderful weekend.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024

Thanks for the well wishes and nice feedback, may God bless you to.

Comment from talented150

Excellent

Beautiful imagery. I imagine you camping and going into a little chapel to worship. The Chapel allows the sun to shine in and you feel God's love for you. But you need even more love from God. I feel your humility.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024

Thanks for the comment.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This sounds like quite a gathering of like minded people who have come together to sing and praise and I enjoyed the sentiment in this post, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024

Thanks you for the feedback.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

What a heartfelt poem! I love how you've captured the atmosphere of the chapel. Your descriptions, especially with the "metal seat below" and "ceiling of wood high above" are perfect. I like the repetition of the sun shining in - adds such warmth. Your honesty about needing God's love makes the poem so touching. Keep sharing your inspiring voice!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024

Thanks for the positive feedback.

Comment from Kahlani

Excellent

I could imagine myself inside the chapel with the sun shining through the colored stained glass, singing hymns with my fellow churchgoers. What a beautiful thought. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024

Thanks for your comment.

Is there any thing you see that could be improved, would love to know.