Comment from Katiemae1977

Excellent

This is interesting for a haiku. I really like it. "A soul full of sunshine and a heart of gold" very nice.
Thoughouly enjoyed this one!
Luv&stuff
Katherine

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024

Thank you very much, Katherine

Gypsy 😊

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Too me it says that her outward appearance reflects who she is on the inside. A beautiful and dear soul. Thank you for sharing your work with me, it was a pleasure ti read.
RJ

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024

Thank you very much, RJ

Gypsy 😊

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

A very beautiful Haiku and the golden colours of sunshine and gold are beautiful. Nice grouping of sunshine, shines, and shimmering. Very pleasing to read this one with the lovely image as well.
Wendy

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024

Thank you very much, Wendy

Gypsy 😊

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

It's really having the "heart of gold" that really makes someone's personality shimmer! Loved all your S and Sh alliteration in your poem and the shimmery picture!

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024

Thank you very much, big sister. I am not beatiful but I'm kind.

❤️ Marival

reply by lyenochka on 08-Oct-2024

I'm sure you were quite the beauty in your youth! But now that we are older, it's our hearts that can show ageless beauty! 💖

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

love the s and sh sounds - it flowed very smoothly
and the the heart of gold was a great end line!

nice written haiku with cool glowing imagery
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024

Thank you very much, Shelley 😊

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Ang Tang

Excellent

Love this! I appreciate how there is no physical description, this could apply to any girl who radiates joy and light. I love how you styled it and the image selection as well. I'd love to read a longer version!!!

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024

Thank you very much, ang
I love haiku but I write longer poems and prose too.
Gypsy hugs

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Gypsy, the imagery in this poem kicks ass. I loved the picture you chose and the way you described her. Shimmering, which made think of something mystical, then the heart of gold which made me think of kindness. Maybe an angel. Gretchen

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024

Thank you very much,
Gretchen

Gypsy hugs