He's Calling Me
A time when my faith was strong13 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Again, where did the picture come from.
Why only the palest matting?
The picture is nice,
The poetry is good and crisp.
Add more to your profile so we can start to know you. There are people here from everywhere. Young and old. All walks of life. Don't forget to ask questions, we will have answers or know someone who does. Karen
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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Again, where did the picture come from.
Why only the palest matting?
The picture is nice,
The poetry is good and crisp.
Add more to your profile so we can start to know you. There are people here from everywhere. Young and old. All walks of life. Don't forget to ask questions, we will have answers or know someone who does. Karen
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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Thanks, Karen. I have to say, I prefer your critiques. Compliments are wonderful and boost my confidence, but critiques help me become a better writer.
Comment from Aussie
Welcome to fanstory mate. There are a few Australians on the site. We have taken ribbons from the yanks (in a friendly way) you will make friends and watch out...fanstory is addictive. I've been here for 13 years! Yes, God speaks to us in mysterious ways. Thank goodness we can hear His voice on the wind or when the birds chitter away. Kace XX Queensland.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Welcome to fanstory mate. There are a few Australians on the site. We have taken ribbons from the yanks (in a friendly way) you will make friends and watch out...fanstory is addictive. I've been here for 13 years! Yes, God speaks to us in mysterious ways. Thank goodness we can hear His voice on the wind or when the birds chitter away. Kace XX Queensland.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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I'm already addicted! Thank you so much, Kace, for your wonderful review. I look forward to reading more of your posts.
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Just dive into my profile page. I just reached 1,000 posts!
Comment from royowen
I used to hear that voice fairly frequently, quite loudly sometimes, but now it's a whisper, but it's different now, more comfortable, in a sense, than it was, it's the reaction of other witnesses where the essence of its purpose, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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I used to hear that voice fairly frequently, quite loudly sometimes, but now it's a whisper, but it's different now, more comfortable, in a sense, than it was, it's the reaction of other witnesses where the essence of its purpose, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you. I wrote this poem years ago and I have only just found it again.
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Great post.
Comment from Todd Bourgeois
What a beautiful piece of work. I love the emotional changes you've shown throughout this piece. As much as it's something that so many people experience, that experience is deeply personal and unique to each person. You have definitely captured that essence in this. The only thing I would be mindful of is, and it is so very minor, the singular and plural tenses in stanzas 2 and 4. I feel there could have been a way to shuffle things around to keep the tenses consistent. Aside from that little thing, you have created a beautiful and honest piece of finding our way and following something/someone greater than us. Well done!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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What a beautiful piece of work. I love the emotional changes you've shown throughout this piece. As much as it's something that so many people experience, that experience is deeply personal and unique to each person. You have definitely captured that essence in this. The only thing I would be mindful of is, and it is so very minor, the singular and plural tenses in stanzas 2 and 4. I feel there could have been a way to shuffle things around to keep the tenses consistent. Aside from that little thing, you have created a beautiful and honest piece of finding our way and following something/someone greater than us. Well done!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for your feedback. I appreciate any constructive comments. I'll go back and see what I can do.
Comment from Begin Again
Beautiful! I sometimes ask why have so many of my family, far younger than I, have passed and I am still here. The answer is always the same. The Lord has plans for me and whatever they may be I am ready to follow his will.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Beautiful! I sometimes ask why have so many of my family, far younger than I, have passed and I am still here. The answer is always the same. The Lord has plans for me and whatever they may be I am ready to follow his will.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Life is very unpredictable, we just have to trust in God. Thank you, Carol.
Comment from Nicki.B
What a wonderful poem oozing of dedicated faith to God. It gives out a message that if you truly believe and and trust in him he will give you the guidance you will need. Well done and best of luck with the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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What a wonderful poem oozing of dedicated faith to God. It gives out a message that if you truly believe and and trust in him he will give you the guidance you will need. Well done and best of luck with the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Nicki. I wrote this poem years ago and I have only just found it again.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful offering for this contest, Kahlani... with a few exceptions, has a tuneful thread to carry the reader through. :-) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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A beautiful offering for this contest, Kahlani... with a few exceptions, has a tuneful thread to carry the reader through. :-) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Yvette. Any advice on how to improve it would be appreciated. I'm always willing to learn from others.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written faith poem for the faith, poetry contest, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I feel about the same way as you feeling the poem as I have just come through the surgery and apparently God still has some things for me to do as well. May God bless you and give you the very words that you need to write or the very helpful situation that you need to help someone else. God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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This is a very well written faith poem for the faith, poetry contest, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I feel about the same way as you feeling the poem as I have just come through the surgery and apparently God still has some things for me to do as well. May God bless you and give you the very words that you need to write or the very helpful situation that you need to help someone else. God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Patricia. Your kind words mean a lot.
Comment from Wils
I love this. It does sometimes feel that God is physically speaking to us and you express this very well. A well deserved six stars from me. Welcome to Fanstory, hope to see more of you
Geoff
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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I love this. It does sometimes feel that God is physically speaking to us and you express this very well. A well deserved six stars from me. Welcome to Fanstory, hope to see more of you
Geoff
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Wow! Thank you so much. I wrote this poem years ago and I knew that now was the time to share it.
Comment from talented150
I knew I liked you! This poem was so insightful into the workings of The Spirit of the Holy Ghost. It is a small voice that whispers to us, or it can be loud as some have said. It sounds that you are enjoying have the Spirit of the Holy Ghost which is abiding in you. I enjoyed your spiritual poem.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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I knew I liked you! This poem was so insightful into the workings of The Spirit of the Holy Ghost. It is a small voice that whispers to us, or it can be loud as some have said. It sounds that you are enjoying have the Spirit of the Holy Ghost which is abiding in you. I enjoyed your spiritual poem.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much. I wrote this poem years ago and I have only just found it again.