Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

This one seems more like a genuine haiku to me because it evoked that feeling I get with "the real deal." I felt peacefulness and as if I'm drifting on air and loving it.

Even your gorgeous picture was perfect here.

I very much enjoyed this entry, Mystery Contestant. I would not be surprised to see you in the Winner's Circle! Good luck. xo

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024

Thank you for the read and encouraging comments. Much appreciated.

reply by Rachelle Allen on 05-Oct-2024

Truly my pleasure! xo

Comment from Sarah Probe S.

Excellent

Lovely Haiku poem, a lot of imagery and a beautiful description of the night falling and the sun disappearing in the background of a multicoloured landscape, this was very inspirational, i hope you win the contest,
Sarah

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024

Thank you so much for your kind wish. Appreciated.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

What a beautiful picture of a sunset that you share here! The imagery of the "golden sun melting" creates such a warm picture. And I love how you capture the transition from day to night with the "sky blushes purple and red." Keep painting those gorgeous scenes with your words!

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024

Thank you so much for the encouraging comments.