Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Enjoyed your poem and the personification that you used. I feel like the night likes snooping and watching the moon and stars "bathing in the creek." I also liked how you made the invitation to the read to come along.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024

Thank you very much, big sister ❤️

Marival 😊

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

This is a beautiful and haunting verse... not only visually, but the traipsing around at night over hill and dale... in the dark, where things are bathing ~ very dramatic in a mellow way. As always, Gypsy, well done.

Melissa

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024

Thank you very much, Melissa

Gypsy 😊

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

The stars and the silver moon bathing together. On my! I sure it could be a very passionate event, especially with them there. Once again, I was delighted to get to read your poetry.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024

Thank you very much, Barbara

Gypsy 😊

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Beautiful Sijo poem that has the traditional form and flow. I like your color patterns that accentuate the theme in a dreamy visual display. Thank you for sharing this beautiful work or art.
RJ

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024

Thank you very much, RJ

Gypsy 😊

reply by RJ Heritage on 03-Oct-2024

You're welcome
RJ

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

that "come with me" sounds a bit creepy...
or maybe it's just me getting close to halloween lol

great sijo with nice imagery and smooth flow
i liked the part where the night hikes...

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024

Creepy, that's me lol

Thank you very much, Shelley

Gypsy 😊

Comment from Esther Brown

Excellent

As always, your poetry touches my heart. The picture always perfectly complements whatever poem you write. Gypsy, you are amazing. It says on your profile you manage three clubs. I am impressed. Esther

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024

Thank you very much, Esther

Gypsy 😊

reply by Esther Brown on 03-Oct-2024

Smiling with you. Enjoy your day!

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024

You too 😊

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Enjoyable personification here creates a wonderfully atmospheric and inviting nighttime tale, as ever beautifully and alluringly presented. Well done, Gypsy, and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024

Thank you very much, Debbie

Gypsy 😊