2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 90 "At the End of the Road".
7 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gypsy,
Great Jesei Naani poem.
At 67 I often think of what might happen to me tomorrow, or the next day...
Your beautiful poem brings some sadness (the lark), but happiness in knowing death is only the beginning of a wonderful life we really can't fathom.
Great poem, Gypsy.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Gypsy,
Great Jesei Naani poem.
At 67 I often think of what might happen to me tomorrow, or the next day...
Your beautiful poem brings some sadness (the lark), but happiness in knowing death is only the beginning of a wonderful life we really can't fathom.
Great poem, Gypsy.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Cindy
I appreciate your exceptional and detailed review. I am grateful that you took the time to read it.
Gypsy hugs!
Comment from Katiemae1977
Wish I had a six for this one Gypsy. I really like it!
It has a peaceful ring to it and your author's notes were so helpful in understanding the nature of this form.
So well done!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Wish I had a six for this one Gypsy. I really like it!
It has a peaceful ring to it and your author's notes were so helpful in understanding the nature of this form.
So well done!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Katiemae
I appreciate your exceptional and detailed review. I am grateful that you took the time to read it.
Gypsy hugs!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, one thing is certain, we all must die. Many know when it's their time, some do not. Your presentation and poem are as excellent as we have all come know. Thank you.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Yes, one thing is certain, we all must die. Many know when it's their time, some do not. Your presentation and poem are as excellent as we have all come know. Thank you.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Barbara
I appreciate your exceptional and detailed review. I am grateful that you took the time to read it.
Gypsy hugs!
Comment from lyenochka
Some people have clear premonition of when they are about to die. Sometimes they ask for something very unusual. The narrator recognizes that all living things die and accepts this part of life.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Some people have clear premonition of when they are about to die. Sometimes they ask for something very unusual. The narrator recognizes that all living things die and accepts this part of life.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Thank you, big sister.
love you,
MariVal
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Love you, too! 💞
Comment from Wendy G
Excellent presentation as you thoughtfully remind us of the mortality of all living beings, including ourselves. Both images, as well as your words, are very meaningful and thought-provoking.
Wendy
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Excellent presentation as you thoughtfully remind us of the mortality of all living beings, including ourselves. Both images, as well as your words, are very meaningful and thought-provoking.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Thank you,
I appreciate your exceptional and detailed review. I am grateful that you took the time to read it.
Gypsy hugs!
Comment from shelley kaye
love that cool telescope type pic!
i think it fits the poem perfectly
i like this poem - a nice image of a window being like the end of the road... with a smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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love that cool telescope type pic!
i think it fits the poem perfectly
i like this poem - a nice image of a window being like the end of the road... with a smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 27-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Thank you,
I appreciate your exceptional and detailed review. I am grateful that you took the time to read it.
Gypsy hugs!
Comment from RJ Heritage
I like your allusions of life and death as in the end of the road. I even think I can see this connection with tge shorter burning candle nearing time to go out. I know that death is a transition in Zen philosophy as it is in some Christian beliefs. Thanks for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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I like your allusions of life and death as in the end of the road. I even think I can see this connection with tge shorter burning candle nearing time to go out. I know that death is a transition in Zen philosophy as it is in some Christian beliefs. Thanks for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 27-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Thank you,
I appreciate your exceptional and detailed review. I am grateful that you took the time to read it.
Gypsy hugs!
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My pleasure
RJ