2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gypsy,
I love this Haiku, and it's positivity, especially the last line which paints a picture of care-free leaves, instead of dying ones.
Nice graphics. I like your images too.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Gypsy,
I love this Haiku, and it's positivity, especially the last line which paints a picture of care-free leaves, instead of dying ones.
Nice graphics. I like your images too.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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thank you very much, Cindy
gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I like the idea of the autumn breeze kissing the leave goodbye. That's a happy thought. Then my mind went to is that kiss a peck for a deep kiss. Hmm, since it's just a breeze, I'm sure it's a peck. LOL I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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I like the idea of the autumn breeze kissing the leave goodbye. That's a happy thought. Then my mind went to is that kiss a peck for a deep kiss. Hmm, since it's just a breeze, I'm sure it's a peck. LOL I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy......hard to believe the last of the warm weather is upon us. Just read the here at least the forecast is for a bleak, cold we inter, can't wait!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy......hard to believe the last of the warm weather is upon us. Just read the here at least the forecast is for a bleak, cold we inter, can't wait!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Mike
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Autumn brings change, as Spring brings renewal. Perhaps with Autumn comes tge mind set that life is about to change as we say goodbye to bright hot summers. Beautifully presented verses.
RJ
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Autumn brings change, as Spring brings renewal. Perhaps with Autumn comes tge mind set that life is about to change as we say goodbye to bright hot summers. Beautifully presented verses.
RJ
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
There is a myth about catching leaves. If you are lucky to catch one, it will bring you happiness or good fortune. The colors make the difference.
In my neighborhood, the colors have not yet changed so there are no leaves gliding down. However, your wee poem gives me a good impression what soon will be.
Mark
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Gypsy,
There is a myth about catching leaves. If you are lucky to catch one, it will bring you happiness or good fortune. The colors make the difference.
In my neighborhood, the colors have not yet changed so there are no leaves gliding down. However, your wee poem gives me a good impression what soon will be.
Mark
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Your use of words is so perfect, Gypsy! Love that word 'glide' which personifies the leaves and immediately resonates beautifully and succinctly with their slippery surface, particularly in the wet. Thank you for sharing your delightful Autumn verse. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Your use of words is so perfect, Gypsy! Love that word 'glide' which personifies the leaves and immediately resonates beautifully and succinctly with their slippery surface, particularly in the wet. Thank you for sharing your delightful Autumn verse. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
That autumn breeze not only kissed those leaves goodbye, he gave those leaves wings to go sailing through the sky!
A lovely poem with great illustrations.
leafs (leaves)
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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That autumn breeze not only kissed those leaves goodbye, he gave those leaves wings to go sailing through the sky!
A lovely poem with great illustrations.
leafs (leaves)
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
the dictionary says plural can be leaves or leafs, I just like the sound better. I will add a note to my a.n.
Thank you very much, big sister
❤️ Marival
Actually, it's both, liefs and leaves by the dictionary
Leaf = plural leaves also leafs
merriam webster dictionary
Actually, it's both, liefs and leaves by the dictionary
Leaf = noun
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plural leaves also leafs
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Maybe it's leafs in British English. That's fine, too.
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It's okay, I don't want to confuse people or have to bring up the dictionary, I changed it to leaves.
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Comment from shelley kaye
kisses leafs goodbye - kisses leaves goodbye (ain't english fun? lol)
i like the image of the breeze kissing the leaves. . . before they fly from home...
a great haiku with smooth flow and cool pics and colours
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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kisses leafs goodbye - kisses leaves goodbye (ain't english fun? lol)
i like the image of the breeze kissing the leaves. . . before they fly from home...
a great haiku with smooth flow and cool pics and colours
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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By the dictionary, plural of Leaf is leaves or leafs but for clarity I changed it to leaves.
Thank you very much,
Gypsy