Father, Son and Holy Spirit
Acrostic16 total reviews
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This poem beautifully reflects the deep connection between faith and divine guidance, offering a heartfelt exploration of the relationship between the poet and God.
Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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This poem beautifully reflects the deep connection between faith and divine guidance, offering a heartfelt exploration of the relationship between the poet and God.
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for your encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from Julie Helms
This is a very well-done, acrostic poem, highlighting, many different aspects of faith and the grace of God in our lives.
I particularly like the last part about talking to the Holy Spirit. I do that often, and I am never disappointed! Thanks so much for sharing this.
Julie
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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This is a very well-done, acrostic poem, highlighting, many different aspects of faith and the grace of God in our lives.
I particularly like the last part about talking to the Holy Spirit. I do that often, and I am never disappointed! Thanks so much for sharing this.
Julie
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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I am honored by your words. Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully written poem and it flows very. It is rather loud. Very much and it has a very nice spiritual message. May you have a blessed week and may God bless your life with all good things.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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This is a beautifully written poem and it flows very. It is rather loud. Very much and it has a very nice spiritual message. May you have a blessed week and may God bless your life with all good things.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful collection of rhymes and prayers to bring focus to where we should all try to place it... thanx for sharing such a lovely offering for us all! ;)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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A beautiful collection of rhymes and prayers to bring focus to where we should all try to place it... thanx for sharing such a lovely offering for us all! ;)
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful review. Elaine
Comment from TPAC
Super shout. A poetic structuring, making this read, appealing to its readers. A bounty of love, tangled by beliefs: compelling to my interests. I found it an explosive statement. All these views were stated in my given opinion: prevailing this write.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Super shout. A poetic structuring, making this read, appealing to its readers. A bounty of love, tangled by beliefs: compelling to my interests. I found it an explosive statement. All these views were stated in my given opinion: prevailing this write.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from Kahlani
This is a heartwarming poem, indeed. Your magical words give us all a little bit of hope that there is a happy ever after. It brings about a feeling of peace. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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This is a heartwarming poem, indeed. Your magical words give us all a little bit of hope that there is a happy ever after. It brings about a feeling of peace. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This poem beautifully shares your message of Faith. I love how you shared the image of the Holy Spirit as a peaceful dove. The message to trust in God's eternal love even in difficult times really is beautiful to read. The rhymes flow naturally. This is beautifully crafted. Lovely work!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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This poem beautifully shares your message of Faith. I love how you shared the image of the Holy Spirit as a peaceful dove. The message to trust in God's eternal love even in difficult times really is beautiful to read. The rhymes flow naturally. This is beautifully crafted. Lovely work!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from gansach
This is a wonderful Acrostic poem presenting a lovely message in praise of God the Father, the Son, and the Holy Spirit. Nice imagery and descriptive language, perfect rhyming. Well done!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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This is a wonderful Acrostic poem presenting a lovely message in praise of God the Father, the Son, and the Holy Spirit. Nice imagery and descriptive language, perfect rhyming. Well done!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A deeply religious and moving poem full of faith and hope and I enjoyed the positivity in these words as your message is delivered with a spiritual heart, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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A deeply religious and moving poem full of faith and hope and I enjoyed the positivity in these words as your message is delivered with a spiritual heart, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from Ang Tang
Beautiful poem full of potential! It obviously comes from your heart and your passions shines through. All Id change is that it lacks what I call "flow." I had to go back and read certain lines twice to hear the rhyme and understand some stanzas. I always recommend reading your poem as if you're reciting it (even if it's just to yourself in your head) to make sure it has "flow." You'll know it when you hear it.
Here is my edited version:
Father, full of love, he is by my side
He listens each time that I pray
He's always with me to open my eyes
And inspire a positive day
To Him we owe the honor, the glory, and peace
How I rely on His holy presence, knowing it never will cease.
Eternal, His creation brings tears to my eyes;
It's beauty welcomes my soul.
Bursting with joy, His love all around;
I now know what it means to be whole
He sent us his precious son,
A savior, who tried to show us His ways
Despite this most selfless gift he did give,
God received only betrayal, not praise
But my God forgives, showing mercy and grace
Despite all this heartache and strife
Jesus paid for our sins, the ultimate gift;
Salvation and eternal life
A symbol of peace, let the delicate dove,
Remind us to all read His word
When love is strong and guidance is sought,
All fears fly away like a bird
Seek the Holy Spirit's enduring light
In it, hope cannot be lost.
It will guide the way, and keep you safe
Even on dark scary nights.
Only He can soften the hearts made of stone.
Hearts are meant to be open.
Let down your guard, his light will shine through
He'll make whole all of those who feel broken.
Invite Him in and you'll see, he love you so much
Life can begin again, a fresh start
Heavenly Father is waiting for you
Just allow him to come into your heart
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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Beautiful poem full of potential! It obviously comes from your heart and your passions shines through. All Id change is that it lacks what I call "flow." I had to go back and read certain lines twice to hear the rhyme and understand some stanzas. I always recommend reading your poem as if you're reciting it (even if it's just to yourself in your head) to make sure it has "flow." You'll know it when you hear it.
Here is my edited version:
Father, full of love, he is by my side
He listens each time that I pray
He's always with me to open my eyes
And inspire a positive day
To Him we owe the honor, the glory, and peace
How I rely on His holy presence, knowing it never will cease.
Eternal, His creation brings tears to my eyes;
It's beauty welcomes my soul.
Bursting with joy, His love all around;
I now know what it means to be whole
He sent us his precious son,
A savior, who tried to show us His ways
Despite this most selfless gift he did give,
God received only betrayal, not praise
But my God forgives, showing mercy and grace
Despite all this heartache and strife
Jesus paid for our sins, the ultimate gift;
Salvation and eternal life
A symbol of peace, let the delicate dove,
Remind us to all read His word
When love is strong and guidance is sought,
All fears fly away like a bird
Seek the Holy Spirit's enduring light
In it, hope cannot be lost.
It will guide the way, and keep you safe
Even on dark scary nights.
Only He can soften the hearts made of stone.
Hearts are meant to be open.
Let down your guard, his light will shine through
He'll make whole all of those who feel broken.
Invite Him in and you'll see, he love you so much
Life can begin again, a fresh start
Heavenly Father is waiting for you
Just allow him to come into your heart
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you for taking time to read and review. Elaine