2024 Japanese Poetry
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I think I will remember her name! Your presentation beautifully captures a sensation of heat and fire and warning that she spells danger! Thanks for sharing your fluent and evocative gogyohka verse. Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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I think I will remember her name! Your presentation beautifully captures a sensation of heat and fire and warning that she spells danger! Thanks for sharing your fluent and evocative gogyohka verse. Debbie
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
remember it well & beware - she's awake! are both perfect lines for causing your readers to pause and take notice. Of course, the other lines do a wonderful job describing this female. Once again, you showed us you're the Queen of poetry.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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remember it well & beware - she's awake! are both perfect lines for causing your readers to pause and take notice. Of course, the other lines do a wonderful job describing this female. Once again, you showed us you're the Queen of poetry.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Ulla
Hola, Guapa, this sounds ominous indeed. I will beware as she's awake. In so few words you stir the imagination. I love it.
Espero qué Todo esta bien. Un abrazo, Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Hola, Guapa, this sounds ominous indeed. I will beware as she's awake. In so few words you stir the imagination. I love it.
Espero qué Todo esta bien. Un abrazo, Ulla xxx
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Ulla.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Interesting personification and metaphor. I always thought of destruction as having a masculine form, but today I must admit, with all the goings on, that perception has changed. Very well presented allusion of either our world state, or the complexity of American politics today.
RJ
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Interesting personification and metaphor. I always thought of destruction as having a masculine form, but today I must admit, with all the goings on, that perception has changed. Very well presented allusion of either our world state, or the complexity of American politics today.
RJ
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ. I was thinking of a volcano.
Gypsy 😊
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It is in fact like a volcano.
RJ
Comment from Neonewman
Damn! I love the name! She destroys everything in her path, no doubt. This is a stunning presentation paired beautifully with a mesmerizing, terrifying artwork.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Damn! I love the name! She destroys everything in her path, no doubt. This is a stunning presentation paired beautifully with a mesmerizing, terrifying artwork.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve.
Gypsy 😊
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=)
Comment from lyenochka
That's a scary lady. No wonder they used to name hurricanes after women - apparently, they thought "Destruction" was a woman, too. Beautiful pictures for something that scary. The Hawaiian goddess of fire was Pele - of course, a woman!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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That's a scary lady. No wonder they used to name hurricanes after women - apparently, they thought "Destruction" was a woman, too. Beautiful pictures for something that scary. The Hawaiian goddess of fire was Pele - of course, a woman!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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I like that, the goddess of fire. I wrote this poem thinking about a volcano but I left it up for interpretation.
I remember Moana, I love that movie. Their goddess of creation and life was called Te Fiti. She turned to. Te Ka... goddess of destration when she was mad.
Thank you, big sister.
Love
marival
Comment from Carol Clark2
Your words paint quite a mental picture. I like the presentation, with the various colors of fire, and the pictures also. I like the somewhat ominous lines you wrote. This reminds me of some of the wildfires burning in the US and Canada recently, but your words also apply on a more sensual level. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Your words paint quite a mental picture. I like the presentation, with the various colors of fire, and the pictures also. I like the somewhat ominous lines you wrote. This reminds me of some of the wildfires burning in the US and Canada recently, but your words also apply on a more sensual level. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Carol.
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Love the personification of the term. It was indeed a fiery presentation both in bold word choices and colors for the visual. Very well done, Gypsy!! I liked it a lot. Xoxo
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Love the personification of the term. It was indeed a fiery presentation both in bold word choices and colors for the visual. Very well done, Gypsy!! I liked it a lot. Xoxo
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Rachelle.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh cool!
i like the "remember it well" line
and the "beware she's awake" line
very ominous and mysterious...
nice gogyhoka
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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ooh cool!
i like the "remember it well" line
and the "beware she's awake" line
very ominous and mysterious...
nice gogyhoka
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy 😊