Thank Goodness It's Friday
a 13-syllable poem9 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet, you now have 5 votes.
First off I like your original approach , I was getting tired of reading gore laced poems.
When I read your poem I could not help but think about my government just 10 days before we went in lockdown for the first time in March 2020.
Our leaders were repeatedly assuring : there was no need to panic, that the situation was under control.
Over the last 4 years I have learned that when I hear : we have everything under control means completely the opposite.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Ciao poet, you now have 5 votes.
First off I like your original approach , I was getting tired of reading gore laced poems.
When I read your poem I could not help but think about my government just 10 days before we went in lockdown for the first time in March 2020.
Our leaders were repeatedly assuring : there was no need to panic, that the situation was under control.
Over the last 4 years I have learned that when I hear : we have everything under control means completely the opposite.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you, T
Comment from jessizero
I'm not sure this is really in the horror genre, but it was fun and funny. You got the syllable count right. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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I'm not sure this is really in the horror genre, but it was fun and funny. You got the syllable count right. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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I would consider the aftermath of being hit by a safe.
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I see your point.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Aww he's so cute too! Lovely pic and very amusing, albeit tragic, 13 syllable poem to accompany it. Very relatable too as bad luck always comes in shedfuls...or safefuls! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Aww he's so cute too! Lovely pic and very amusing, albeit tragic, 13 syllable poem to accompany it. Very relatable too as bad luck always comes in shedfuls...or safefuls! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Debbie
Comment from LJbutterfly
Hahaha! If Thursday was the worst, it must have been really, really, bad, if you're glad Friday the 13th is here. You have created a clever poem based on the humorous cartoon. Today is the 14th, and I hope you win the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Hahaha! If Thursday was the worst, it must have been really, really, bad, if you're glad Friday the 13th is here. You have created a clever poem based on the humorous cartoon. Today is the 14th, and I hope you win the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you, LJ
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was terrific. I can almost feel a pause in this thought and the realization that it is now Friday the 13th. It's short, punchy, and put a big grin on my face. Great job!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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I thought this was terrific. I can almost feel a pause in this thought and the realization that it is now Friday the 13th. It's short, punchy, and put a big grin on my face. Great job!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Michael.
Comment from Patrick Bernardy
Hello!
This was a different but very clever take on the prompt. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
Words can kill ... if you're doing it right. This review is sponsored by "The Little Workshop of Horrors" Club! Find us on the club page if you are interested in joining!"
Patrick
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Hello!
This was a different but very clever take on the prompt. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
Words can kill ... if you're doing it right. This review is sponsored by "The Little Workshop of Horrors" Club! Find us on the club page if you are interested in joining!"
Patrick
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Patrick
Comment from papa55mike
The more we focus on the thirteenth, the more we give power to bad things happening in our lives. What a wonderfully written poem, and I love the picture. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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The more we focus on the thirteenth, the more we give power to bad things happening in our lives. What a wonderfully written poem, and I love the picture. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Mike
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
LOL Funny and still fitting within the horror guidelines. Dark humor counts too! Thanks for sharing this unique look at horror. :-) Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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LOL Funny and still fitting within the horror guidelines. Dark humor counts too! Thanks for sharing this unique look at horror. :-) Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn.
Comment from Begin Again
OOPS! rough landing coming! though it appears you won't remember any of it. Cute and to the point. Good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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OOPS! rough landing coming! though it appears you won't remember any of it. Cute and to the point. Good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Carol, for giving this a look.