Aiming to Be the Best for You
Avis and I continue to try...5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Aiming to be the Best for You, may be the revealing of a woman's plan to make Hertz the number one kisser in your kissing contest........
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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This poem, Aiming to be the Best for You, may be the revealing of a woman's plan to make Hertz the number one kisser in your kissing contest........
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Nah - forty years passed
She would have been gine
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love how this poem blends humor with a serious message. The promise to strive for the title of "best kisser" says a lot. And the line "we will have to practice" is perfect. It's a sweet way of declaring love that made me smile. Great job.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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I love how this poem blends humor with a serious message. The promise to strive for the title of "best kisser" says a lot. And the line "we will have to practice" is perfect. It's a sweet way of declaring love that made me smile. Great job.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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It might even be funnier if the reviewers understood she really did rate someone better, and never told me who it was, but whatever, he obviously did not pursue her and I did. Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adored the sentiments in this post Tom as you continue to perfect your kisses and the love for your wife is evident in every word here, a joy to read, far from being second best, you are the best, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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I adored the sentiments in this post Tom as you continue to perfect your kisses and the love for your wife is evident in every word here, a joy to read, far from being second best, you are the best, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Aah. Lucky for my wife, you and I, hadn't met or she might have to have searched on for something better to replace number one kisser.
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Ha ha ha x x. x
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Not funny but funny writing prompt. This sounds like a perfect relationship to me. I think you are on to something...she doesn't really think you are second best, she enjoys making you try harder to be better. Smart woman.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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An excellent entry for the Not funny but funny writing prompt. This sounds like a perfect relationship to me. I think you are on to something...she doesn't really think you are second best, she enjoys making you try harder to be better. Smart woman.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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And the light goes on! I think your observation is correct.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a nice wry comment about marriage and a women settling for number two choice and making her husband feel that he has to continuously try to make up for his shortcomings.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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a nice wry comment about marriage and a women settling for number two choice and making her husband feel that he has to continuously try to make up for his shortcomings.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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... and yet after years, was it a ploy to have me try harder. She';; never tell. Thank you.
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... and yet after years, was it a ploy to have me try harder. She';; never tell. Thank you.
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... and yet after years, was it a ploy to have me try harder. She';; never tell. Thank you.
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... and yet after years, was it a ploy to have me try harder. She';; never tell. Thank you.
