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In the eyes of a crow, you reap what you sow

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I guess in the eyes of a crow one would reap what they sow. Crows aren't always peaceful birds. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I want to wish you luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2024

Comment from Julie Helms
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In a very unique way, your poem highlights (to me) the human carnage of war, from dumb decisions to wasted lives. It's thought provoking. Best of luck with your entry!
Julie

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024

Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I thought your poem was powerful and also somewhat haunting. The stark imagery of struggle comes through in each line. You've shared the brutal realities of war so well. The rhyme is natural and adds to the intensity of your poem. Great job.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024