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Hide the Word in your Heart

A nonet

17 total reviews 
Comment from LJbutterfly
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I enjoyed the inspiration and message of this poem. Studying and following the word of God brings strength, joy, and peace. The beautiful words of your nonet poem provide a guide we should all live by.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
    With gratitude, my heart, I wish to thank you for a very, very, very nice review.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This nonet, Hide the Word in Your Heart, has the proper formatting and tells the secret of being positive and strong throughout life. The battle is won already.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
    With gratitude of my heart, I wish to thank you for a very nice review
Comment from Sue Smith
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I love the clear coherent message in this poem and that it concludes on a really strong word. I found myself pausing after the word truth and did think it could have a full stop there as you seem to be making a new point after that. But it's clever use of the nonet structure and the way you've set it out enhances that. A great example of the form

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
    Thank you for making the time to read and review my work
Comment from June Sargent
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So true. We are able to light up not only our own our lives, but also those of others by studying and applying the Word of God. We can then reflect the divine power of love in all that we do. The works would be a better place.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much for your kind review. It is very much appreciated.
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
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Patricia,
These are lovely words to live by.
Giving light to others, like you do in your poetry, is such a blessing.
Have a lovely day, Patricia.
Best wishes and blessings,
Cindy
Patricia, it's ok to share the Bible with people who truly appreciate it.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    I am always grateful when I get such nice comments is this thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I loved the archaic use of the word (blest) here in order make your nonet formation more structured, a fine poem with wise and loving sentiments Patricia, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Thank you for stopping by my work and they be such a nice comment
Comment from Begin Again
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Very nicely written, Patricia! Yes, carrying the world of God in our hearts and minds can be the light that keeps us from the darkness in this world... the moments that threaten to sweep our peace away. I know that I am blessed and friends on Fanstory and poems like yours remind me every day.
Smiles and hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    I am always grateful when I get such nice comments thank you so much
Comment from GWHARGIS
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There are parts of the Bible that I love. I understand them and try to live by them. But then there are parts that are totally confusing and see to make no sense. This was good advice to carry the word of God with you in your heart. Greychen

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Your reviews are always special thank you so much
Comment from Sugarray77
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Hi Patricia. Good morning and may the Lord bless you today! I enjoyed reading your faith-filled Nonet. Well done and finely constructed. It builds faith in your readers' hearts.!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Thank you for stopping by reading my work and leaving
Comment from Wendy G
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This is an excellent presentation, and a well written Nonet to share a valuable truth. You have offered a reminder of how important it is to remain close to Him.
Wendy

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much for your very kind review is a pleasure when I hear such nice words as this.