His Silence
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Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh wow, you left us with quite the cliff-hanger. You have built up suspense well. You've still got me worried that Danielle is going back to that horrible place to stay. She's quitting her job and even trying to get Callum to go as well.
Great character development and intrigue.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Oh wow, you left us with quite the cliff-hanger. You have built up suspense well. You've still got me worried that Danielle is going back to that horrible place to stay. She's quitting her job and even trying to get Callum to go as well.
Great character development and intrigue.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you Rhonda. Things are definitely going to get darker from here. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
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I kind of figured that. The nice in me would like for her to run, but, then that doesn't make for much of a book, lol.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Great place to end the chapter, awful place when I have to wait until your next post to see if this connection, she has made, amounts to anything. My thought is it is someone from the house making threats, but they don't seem to use media.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Great place to end the chapter, awful place when I have to wait until your next post to see if this connection, she has made, amounts to anything. My thought is it is someone from the house making threats, but they don't seem to use media.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Thank you Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can't wait to find out what Max discovered about Ian. I have a feeling the people at the compound are who threatened Max. I also feel they ordered Harvey to murder his parents because they left the compound. I can't wait to read more.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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I can't wait to find out what Max discovered about Ian. I have a feeling the people at the compound are who threatened Max. I also feel they ordered Harvey to murder his parents because they left the compound. I can't wait to read more.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Now there's an interesting development and a nice hook at the end. Also, good to have a clarification as to why Danielle isn't bothering with Harvey at the moment (although if he's going to speak to anyone, she may well be the best bet). Excellent, Jacob! Debbie
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Now there's an interesting development and a nice hook at the end. Also, good to have a clarification as to why Danielle isn't bothering with Harvey at the moment (although if he's going to speak to anyone, she may well be the best bet). Excellent, Jacob! Debbie
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your writing has has a suspenseful quality that really pulls you in. I was instantly drawn into the tension between Danielle and Max. The way you build up the mystery surrounding Max's past and the threats he faced is so well done. I like how you shared Danielle's anxiety - I could feel the weight of her search for answers. Great job! This was so enjoyable to read.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Your writing has has a suspenseful quality that really pulls you in. I was instantly drawn into the tension between Danielle and Max. The way you build up the mystery surrounding Max's past and the threats he faced is so well done. I like how you shared Danielle's anxiety - I could feel the weight of her search for answers. Great job! This was so enjoyable to read.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
This is news that the Max was getting threats and didn't dare put any more information about about the other person killed. I anxious to find out what Max learned that he couldn't put on his pod cast.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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This is news that the Max was getting threats and didn't dare put any more information about about the other person killed. I anxious to find out what Max learned that he couldn't put on his pod cast.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Beth. Max is definitely letting his curiosity by speaking to Danielle get the better of him. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
Nice cliffhanger, Jacob! Of course, the reader is sitting on the edge of their seats waiting to know what Max found out and if it will help Danielle in any way. This Max guy seems a little shady himself though so she better weigh his responses carefully. And who did the threats? Jeremiah or Oliver?
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Nice cliffhanger, Jacob! Of course, the reader is sitting on the edge of their seats waiting to know what Max found out and if it will help Danielle in any way. This Max guy seems a little shady himself though so she better weigh his responses carefully. And who did the threats? Jeremiah or Oliver?
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.