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Murder At The Berkshire

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Things aren't as they seem at the elderly home.

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Comment from Wendy G
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Lol. Yes, the more there are of them, the more likely they are to get caught, and no excuse will seem very plausible. The humorous tale is progressing well!
Wendy

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
    I laughed at my own "Walking Dead" line. Ha! This is fun to write.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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"We'll look like the walking dead" lol so funny

What adorable four elderly ladies. It reminds me of a television show, the Only Murders in the Building. The story plot moves along nicely, it's intriguing. Good character development. Well done, Douglas.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
    Thank you, my friend! I'm having fun writing this little adventure
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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My, they're a wacky bunch! Thank goodness, Hattie's in charge! This isn't going to be an easy one to solve with all those suspects, not to mention trying to calm the excitement of all her fellow investigators! Why do I think this latest plan might actually be doomed and we're getting close to another murder! Your amusing and refreshing story is a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing, Doug. Debbie

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
    It's whacky, alright!!!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Maybe it's just me but four old ladies together searching a vacant room can't all be sleepwalking all at the same time and in the same room. LOL Oh well, they are interesting old ladies. One of my sons says one needs to watch out for old ladies they are conniving and gang up on you. They trapped him in a church pew until he agreed to be on the church board. I do like this story.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
    I'm having a lot of fun here. Appreciate you!
Comment from Begin Again
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Okay, the girls are in high gear and revving up for a raid on Room 413 at 1 p.m. With all the giggling and noise they make, they are going to have a difficult time not getting caught, but we can hope for the best! Another good chapter with the ladies!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
    Thank you, Carol!!!