Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A well worded poem for the contest and your words described the scene perfectly without any need for a picture here. Those sunsets are magical, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024

Thank you.

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024

Thank you.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Great job. I love your imagery - especially "crimson red and golden glow".
The repetition of "unending" works so well here. For me your poem shares a sense of timelessness.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024

Thank you Michael.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I enjoyed your twenty-four syllable poem. It was lovely, and you got the syllable count right. I also loved your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024

Thank you Jess.

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

that is really good!
It has good meter, good rhyme, good message, and accompanied by a lovely picture.
All of that within 24 syllables. amazing.
Good luck in the contest.
Katharine

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024

Thank you Katharine.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

You have a vivid use of words that fits the picture perfectly. Your smooth rhyming of words adds to the feeling of being at dusk. The word "show" is perfect because nature does put on a show.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024

Thank you.