The Funeral
This Is a poem depicting my husband's funeral7 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a nice companion piece to your earlier poem Denial dealing with the aftermath of losing your husband after a horrific car crash very powerful and moving poem
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a nice companion piece to your earlier poem Denial dealing with the aftermath of losing your husband after a horrific car crash very powerful and moving poem
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
Comment from Teri7
I wish I had six stars to give you for this really sad, but very well written free verse poem about your husband's funeral. I am so very sorry for your loss. I wish you the best in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
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I wish I had six stars to give you for this really sad, but very well written free verse poem about your husband's funeral. I am so very sorry for your loss. I wish you the best in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
Comment from jessizero
This was a great piece of verse, though it was sad. I enjoyed the rhymes, and the message was lovely. Thank you for sharing this poem, and best wishes to you.
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This was a great piece of verse, though it was sad. I enjoyed the rhymes, and the message was lovely. Thank you for sharing this poem, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
Comment from SimianSavant
You have depicted here in simple, effective and devastating language what it's like to lose someone you love. The weight of such loss is impossible to convey to someone who has not experienced it themselves, but you did some justice to it here. Thank you for sharing.
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You have depicted here in simple, effective and devastating language what it's like to lose someone you love. The weight of such loss is impossible to convey to someone who has not experienced it themselves, but you did some justice to it here. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Funerals seem to occur on rainy dull days and the weather was awful when I buried my husband too. I am sorry for your loss and many will identify with your sad and grief filled poem, love Dolly x x x
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Funerals seem to occur on rainy dull days and the weather was awful when I buried my husband too. I am sorry for your loss and many will identify with your sad and grief filled poem, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Funeral, presented with six uni-rhyme quatrains and a couplet, depicts a worrisome and miserable affair where the subject was eventually interred during the rain. The sense of seeming futility was strong.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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This poem, The Funeral, presented with six uni-rhyme quatrains and a couplet, depicts a worrisome and miserable affair where the subject was eventually interred during the rain. The sense of seeming futility was strong.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from royowen
What an interesting theme, it fits in with the liberal forms that the contest has termed, free form is really anything that you feel comfortable with and even if one wants to write in a challenging form, beautifully written, and fits with the the finality of life, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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What an interesting theme, it fits in with the liberal forms that the contest has termed, free form is really anything that you feel comfortable with and even if one wants to write in a challenging form, beautifully written, and fits with the the finality of life, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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Thank you!
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Welcome