The Changing
free form poem3 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author,
This is an excellent image-filled poem. You asked such poignant questions. I dread the end of fall, because I live where winters are harsh and unforgiving.
Good luck!
Best wishes,
Cindy
You have my vote.
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Author,
This is an excellent image-filled poem. You asked such poignant questions. I dread the end of fall, because I live where winters are harsh and unforgiving.
Good luck!
Best wishes,
Cindy
You have my vote.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
I love the way you put the pictures throughout the poem but even without them, you painted a picture with your words it's beautiful. I especially love the 'which drink of its rain' line, definitely my favorite.
The question at the end invites deeper reflection adding a thoughtful close to the poem. Love it
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I love the way you put the pictures throughout the poem but even without them, you painted a picture with your words it's beautiful. I especially love the 'which drink of its rain' line, definitely my favorite.
The question at the end invites deeper reflection adding a thoughtful close to the poem. Love it
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Changing, speaks of this pending change from season and what is here now, to whatever is next. The arrival does not seem to be anticipated kindly.
I had to squint to read this as the text is bloated and blinding.
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This poem, The Changing, speaks of this pending change from season and what is here now, to whatever is next. The arrival does not seem to be anticipated kindly.
I had to squint to read this as the text is bloated and blinding.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024